Beauty of the Pond

The pond laps on the side edge of itself Tiny waves form by the moon’s influence Ripples formed by all the tree’s seeds falling Beauty of this scene has some innocence Reflections in the pond are barely there Wavy image appears on the surface A calming feel is presented right here Each ripple arrives as if in a race Light ricochets off the water’s bright form Opening my heart to wondrous beauty Safely this pond allows me perfect ease My soul’s receptive of tranquility I throw pebbles in the inviting pond I see some fish rising to water’s top Showing off and tempting me to catch them I’ll remember joy, never the teardrops Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Jones Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 10:38 PM
There is something hypnotic about being by the water, just like the fire...it moves..changes...lives before our eyes..takes our minds off our current thoughts....dreamy Russell....loved it...
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 8:20 PM
this one is very lovely, Russell. and the message of the last stanza is sweet.
Carrillo Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 8:36 PM
This is just beautiful. I can just picture myself there by that beautiful pond. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
Kayode Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 1:25 PM
No doubt your narrative power is legendary,your poems always delight my heart.A great one again like ever.Kudos my friend.
Onclaud Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 5:14 AM
ohh i enjoy the tranqui feel of this aplebdud writem russell... nothing like the simple joy of connecting with nature through a bouyant pond.... how lovely !.. huggs
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February 24, 2014 at 12:46 AM
Reminds me of walking through a nearby park that has several ponds that fit this description. Another fine write, Russell.
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