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Beauty of Spring

As winter leaves the stage and takes a bow A gentle warmth rejuvenates the earth And dormant spring awakens to endow Creation with a glorious rebirth. The sun-kissed touch of resurrection's sway Excites all nature with its full embrace. Proud tulips raise their heads in bright array And spiders weave their threads of silken lace. The dulcet sounds of birdsong fill the skies As butterflies with stained glass wings take flight. Fair, fragile chiffon poppies mesmerize And cheery golden daffodils delight. Each season brings its blessings from above But spring extols the measure of God's love. 02.03.19 N/A MAY 2019 PREMIER 4,ANY FORM,ANY THEME,UPTO A MAX OF 14(F O U R T E E N )Lines 'Spring Sonnet Poetry Contest' sponsored by John Hamilton 10 syllables per line rhyme scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GG Includes compulsory 4 words : 1.Dulcet 2. Chiffon 3. Lace 4. Resurrection also entered into :Your Best Poem That Is Trophy (Premiere Contest) Worthy Contest 1 Poetry Contest - Tania Kitchin I was happy to be included in any top ten judged by John Hamilton but would like to submit this as one which was quite a challenge with regard to the compulsory words and which I feel paints a pretty picture.

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Date: 2/15/2023 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/13/2023 8:20:00 AM
Dear Wendy, your couplet is a grand finale to a vibrant poem extolling Spring's sumptuous rebirth. Splendid poetry! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/10/2021 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/17/2022 1:17:00 AM
Thank you,Christuraj.
Date: 3/17/2020 9:21:00 PM
Beautiful expressions of the season of rebirth.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/17/2022 1:16:00 AM
Yes, it cheers us all at its arrival, Juliet.
Date: 3/17/2020 12:29:00 PM
Is it any coincidence we celebrate Christ's resurrection in the Spring? I think not. Love this celebration of Spring, Wendy, it will be upon us in only 4 days! Congrats on your #1, this sonnet is a fav! ~ John
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/17/2022 1:15:00 AM
Lovely to hear from you as always,John. thank you for your kind words.
Date: 1/8/2020 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/17/2022 1:15:00 AM
Thank you, Brenda.
Date: 9/7/2019 2:33:00 AM
yes God's love is portrayed in Spring, you hit the nail on the head :) Beautiful sonnet lovely Wendy. Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/17/2022 1:15:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment,Lu-Loo.
Date: 3/23/2019 1:31:00 PM
Lovely write Wendy, congrats on a fine win!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 4:25:00 PM
I'm really happy to have been placed in your contest,John. Thank you!
Date: 3/12/2019 6:50:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Wendy.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 4:27:00 PM
Thanks,Line.
Date: 3/11/2019 9:55:00 AM
Very nice, Wendy-- love the ending couplet! Congrats on your win.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 4:27:00 PM
Thanks,L.J. Those last two lines are so important for making an impact whilst rounding off the poem aren't they!
Date: 3/11/2019 9:02:00 AM
Back with congrats Wendy!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 4:25:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Craig. Thanks for the encouragement.
Date: 3/11/2019 8:31:00 AM
Well done, Wendy. Congrats on your win.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 4:24:00 PM
Thanks for your encouragement,Line.
Date: 3/10/2019 10:00:00 PM
A very tightly-structured but loosely-woven Sonnet, Wendy, the way they should be, in my humble opinion ... full of beauty, emotion, intent, and grace. It's easy to see why Mark picked this one, and why John will adore it, I'm sure. Congrats and blessings, my friend! :-) <3
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 4:24:00 PM
I really appreciate your encouraging words,Greg. thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 3/10/2019 2:46:00 PM
How beautifully you have woven the required words into this lovely Sonnet, Wendy. I enjoyed the lovely Spring imagery it presents! Congratulations on your nice placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 4:23:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging words, Sandra.
Date: 3/8/2019 9:43:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Wendy! So Lovely! Janice
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 4:22:00 PM
Thank you,Janice. It was a pleasant topic to write about!
Date: 3/8/2019 9:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Wendy, well written with great imagery . Have a nice weekend. hugs Eve ~,`*
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 4:21:00 PM
Thank you,Eve. I enjoyed composing this one.
Date: 3/8/2019 6:15:00 PM
Wendy, what a wonderful sonnet that nicely extols the beauty of Spring! I love the wisdom revealed in your last two lines, that each season brings blessings, "But Spring extols the measure of God's love." Congratulations on your win on Mile 22 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final, which is just 5 contests away! ~Mark
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 4:20:00 PM
Mark, I'm so pleased to have placed with this sonnet and thank you for all the time you are investing in the marathon challenge.
Date: 3/3/2019 1:10:00 PM
Hey Girl, you did the meter proud and the message to top it off! John said 10 syllables but he knows meter so you should get extra credit for putting it in iambic pentameter.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 3/3/2019 5:14:00 PM
Thank you,Craig. I naturally write in this meter for a sonnet but have read some which read well without conforming to it. Thank you for the additional information you gave regarding 'The perfect storm'. No wonder you could write with feeling.

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