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BEAUTY IN THE DARKNESS - Sanal Kumar on Fstoppers

there dwells a darkness in us all those shadows trembling faintly to give our dearest debt its pall and crimp us with its careful call life weighed oft' south of saintly ... each 'if' decided, slight or grand comes with a thoughtful reason and with intent or just off-hand in light AND dark we understand those answers and their season ... why do we fear this darkness so that comes like light, to guide us there is a beauty there to know a warmth, a depth, an afterglow that shares that space inside us ... the twilight falls in peaceful awe and brings thru nights, so tender the starlit nips of midnight's maw our hazy dreams, unfettered, raw that we, through sleep, surrender ... we do not dwell there all the time for light brings sight through vision yet think of verse without a rhyme we need that balanced id, sublime and weigh things through decision ... most our mem'ries start from black though dwells there, naught a fear just that strange and unknown lack of light, yet light DID find the crack and shined us straight through here ... true darkness is not life's dear end those depths we plumb thru death but all bent souls that do descend to where the lines and colors blend 'tween wrong and each dear breath ... each dear, sweet, precious breath.

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Date: 7/12/2021 6:23:00 PM
hey, way to go, buddy. /this one is number 4 on best new poems list. I'm doing well lately on this list. You are rocking it here.
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Date: 7/5/2021 4:32:00 PM
What a wonderful well written poem, thank you!!
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Date: 6/23/2021 4:36:00 PM
You are a treasure to Poetry Soup, Bard. Congrats on another beautiful and thought-provoking gem and the honor of potd ~ John
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Date: 6/15/2021 7:45:00 AM
Out of blackness into blackness...Congratulations Gregory Richard Barden on POTD. Well done.
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Date: 6/14/2021 11:41:00 AM
A truly wonderful poem that competes with the masters Greg. Congratulations on POTD and your first placement. This is going into my faves! Blessings Connie
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Date: 6/14/2021 5:18:00 AM
Caren this is a masterpiece! Your pen flows beautifully with vivid rhymes. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 6/14/2021 5:05:00 AM
Still love this gem. God bless you and Congrats on POTD, dear friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:40:00 AM
I am back again to give my hearty congratulations on this your great new creation being awarded POTD my friend! Certainly a most worthy choice in its selection. You do dark poetry absolutely brilliantly and with such style and flair... God bless..
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Date: 6/13/2021 7:44:00 PM
Excellent piece of writing , Greg, expressing strong deep emotions. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/13/2021 5:45:00 PM
"We do not dwell there all the time" In darkness. I should hope not. One can be totally lost (in darkness) if they continue down that path. Allow light to break through. Poetry is a release of those deep emotions. You have created a Masterpiece here, Greg. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 6/13/2021 2:30:00 PM
Beautiful Poetry Gregory, congratulations on being honoured with poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 6/13/2021 1:03:00 PM
This is an excellent piece. Congrats on POTD. Much deserved. Have a great day.
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Date: 6/13/2021 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD - an awesome pom, deserving POTD and the honor bestowed on you. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 6/13/2021 10:54:00 AM
Wow. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/13/2021 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD win. A creative write. Enjoy your win with blessings...........
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Date: 6/13/2021 7:46:00 AM
Oh, my! Your poetry is beautiful; your word so well chosen! I'm making it a fav. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 6/13/2021 7:38:00 AM
Greg, a captivating poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 6/13/2021 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on this excellent , well written POTD! :)
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Date: 6/13/2021 6:43:00 AM
Greg, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY, enjoy the honor, peace _Constance
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Date: 6/13/2021 5:53:00 AM
a wonderful poem Gregory Richard Barden through the eyes of a great artist ! I admire this and related to your perception. Thank you so much for sharing, you've made myself and I assume many- a little less lonely.
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Date: 6/13/2021 5:21:00 AM
as long as it's not carrying a scythe.....fantastic write Greg...love the final pivotal point ..."to where the lines and colors blend 'tween wrong and each dear breath.."
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Date: 6/13/2021 3:51:00 AM
Yes, there is a beauty in black, the darkness. There is no 'light'..without 'darkness'.., just like how a rhyme in a verse brightens the beauty of the verse..I loved this stanza specially.. 'Most of our memories start from black... '. An insightful poem with rhyme and alliterative beauty. Congrats on your very much deserving POTD Greg Bardon.. God Bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 6/13/2021 3:35:00 AM
Beautiful write on darkness. Congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour
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Date: 6/13/2021 2:55:00 AM
From start to finish a poem that captivated my interest......
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Date: 6/12/2021 6:56:00 PM
So intriguing and musical... amazing you write so beautifully about darkness. Love this - God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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