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Beauty

dancing
in one's mind
beauty in the eye
that of the beholder

emotionally 
with love
sweetest darling
played using
the silken cords
on a spiders web

weaving together
feelings touching tender
soft and so
very beautiful
fall weak
at the knees

emotions churning
unbelievable softness
like those of a child
whispering 
in tenderness

how this world
from so many colours
drawing from your eyes
looks and shines
amazing beauty
full of adventure

love it shines
in the light
of a thousand candles
flickering dancing
sweet gentle breeze
in the soul 

softly landing
floating spirits
loves beauty
a million miles away
in another space
known as 
paradise

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/15/2013 1:47:00 PM
Lovely work as always partner.
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Date: 9/15/2013 2:44:00 PM
AMAZING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT MY DEAR FRIEND DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/14/2013 3:24:00 PM
Speechless...All i say is to my favs.Ahh how i love verses about candles.So romantic.
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Date: 9/15/2013 2:43:00 PM
MIGHT HAVE TO SPARK UP FOR YOU WONDERFUL COMMENT MY DEAR FRIEND HEARTFELT APPRECIATED
Date: 9/14/2013 12:07:00 PM
This is one beautiful piece of poetry! Absolutely stunning imagery! I loved it, I am adding it to my favorites! Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and I sure could see it in this poem! Excellent writing, Liam!
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liam mcdaid
Date: 9/14/2013 12:47:00 PM
HUMBLED BY YOUR BEAUTIFUL COMMENT KELLY I THANK YOU DEARLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/14/2013 9:52:00 AM
A lovely, lyrical write, Liam! I enjoyed reading your work! Love, Kim
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liam mcdaid
Date: 9/14/2013 12:46:00 PM
THANK YOU KIM BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/14/2013 9:24:00 AM
I agree beauty is in the eyes of a beholder, liam
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liam mcdaid
Date: 9/14/2013 12:44:00 PM
THANK YOU DEEPLY FOR THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/14/2013 6:48:00 AM
lovely write Liam in your usual masterly style Shadow x smile
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liam mcdaid
Date: 9/14/2013 8:31:00 AM
LINDA MY FRIEND THANK YOU DEEPLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT GREATLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/14/2013 6:36:00 AM
Like a beautiful lullaby bringing rest to a loved one....Lovely
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liam mcdaid
Date: 9/14/2013 8:30:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT I PASS A SMILE DEEPLY APPRECIATED