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Beauty

The youthful beauty of an unlined face Unsullied by the use that lies ahead Has still the freshness of an unturned page. A book to show its worth must have been read. True fairness shows when beauty dwells within. No need to fear effects of time's swift pace, Though chance of fate can its bright radiance dim And leave sad mark on that beloved face. Beauty untried is beauty quite unearned; Fair to behold with worthiness unproved. The cherished face with lines of living burned Will to true lover, surely be more loved. The beauty not reflected in the glass Remains when more apparent charms shall pass. By: Joyce Johnson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/16/2014 5:52:00 PM
Awesome win Joyce, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/15/2014 9:38:00 AM
I love Richard's comments, that this has inspired him to write a poem for his wife. I agree that beauty comes with life, living with love and is not reflected in the mirror, but instead in the soul. :) Congratulations dear Joyce!
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Date: 4/15/2014 9:34:00 AM
After writing you my comment I was inspired to write a poem for my wife. You inspired me.
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Date: 4/15/2014 8:49:00 AM
My wife has become more beautiful line my line. I love how you expressed yourself in this poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/15/2014 1:59:00 AM
Oh this is so insightful, Love it. Wonderful job Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/15/2014 12:03:00 AM
So true! It's what's inside that counts. This poem was written beautifully, Joyce! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 6/19/2010 2:47:00 PM
This is excellent. I like the rhyming pattern. I also like the essence of the poem regarding beauty; as we know it's in the eyes of the beholder. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/19/2010 9:23:00 AM
It seems this is what we must love about chidren. Congrats on this selection. LOve, daver
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Date: 6/18/2010 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2010 1:40:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/14/2010 1:13:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/13/2010 9:56:00 PM
Congratulations to a talented poet. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:28:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your sonnet "Beauty" being featured. Vince
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Date: 10/10/2008 8:27:00 PM
This is beautiful...the last two lines are memorable! Blessed be! Starfish
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Date: 10/9/2008 6:34:00 PM
With age comes wisdom..Excellent write, Always, Christy
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