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This was written from a MALE's perspective for a writing prompt.

Beautiful Asian doll in water so clear
You express my soul dream, my lovely dear
You have my heart, and my admiration too
You have conquered my essence through and through

I do not deserve your heartfelt mermaid love.
I should stay away from you, angel, from above.
You are my ideal woman, my gorgeous Asian doll
I dream of you nightly, my love, so petite, and small

Your porcelain cheeks, your glistening hair, your Bambi eyes
I want to keep you forever and ever, my heart so cries.
I see you nightly in my dearest kindest, utmost dream.
You are everything I have ever wanted with lips of cream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/10/2019 8:36:00 PM
Great job!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/10/2019 10:52:00 PM
I will take a slight bow.
Date: 4/10/2019 6:32:00 PM
Very well done.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/10/2019 10:52:00 PM
Thank you, I knew you would like it.
Date: 4/10/2019 3:46:00 PM
You have transported me back in time to when I read of those 'porcelain dolls' in the teahouses of Pearl Buck's classic novel, 'The Good Earth.' Amazing response to the prompt, Caren!! (GREAT idea for a contest too, by the way). Best wishes, Gershon
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/10/2019 10:53:00 PM
It was a beautiful photo; unfortunately my computer does not put photos on this site. No idea why. I can put them every place else.
Date: 4/10/2019 11:15:00 AM
Lovely poem. A beautiful poem for a beautiful people. Have a great day.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/10/2019 2:07:00 PM
Thank you! *ufo* *whee* *ufo*
Date: 4/10/2019 7:20:00 AM
Asian Doll....https://youtu.be/YzzDLujpat4
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/10/2019 2:12:00 PM
Thank you for the info! I had no idea. This was a poetry prompt on another poetry site - a beautiful Asian mermaid, in water.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/10/2019 7:21:00 AM
wtf
Date: 4/10/2019 3:26:00 AM
Lovely dream, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/10/2019 5:30:00 AM
Thank you Victor. I always hesitate a bit to do these photo prompts with a beautiful woman for a contest, for when my husband reads it he will be wondering again if I have "turned". But I am so GOOD at these silly contests, so I cannot resist.