Beautiful Spring Days - the Tanka Style

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~Beautiful Spring Days~ (Double Tanka) Spring is beautiful Trees happily come alive Flowers bloom again Butterfly, hummingbirds fly Spring is a sight to behold The skies seem bluer Days now are more beautiful Your face only glows With happiness in the sun And in your eyes just joy shows. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2017 April.05.2017 ~Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see." - Mark Twain

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Chris Green

Date: 4/5/2017 5:53:00 PM

Once again I come here to read and find nothing but beauty waiting for my eyes. You have captured the essence of spring in the air with a hint of romance, which always seems to come with the season. Wonderfully done.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/5/2017 8:59:00 PM

Hi Chris! Thank you ever so kindly, for stopping by once again and commenting so beautifully here on my spring poem and for your very generous 7.So happy you liked this one Chris.I deeply appreciate it all:)). Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)) D

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/5/2017 3:38:00 PM

Hello Dorian. This is lovely and gentle imagery. Your words are spring. The both tanka stanzas are in perfect form. Well done entirely.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/5/2017 9:00:00 PM

Hi Lisa!Thank you ever so kindly for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my spring poem, and for the great 7.So glad you liked this one Lisa.I deeply appreciated all :)) Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D