Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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22.08.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Beautiful Or Broken -
Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

1st place in the contest

Poem of the Day 

24.08.2023

- Beautiful -

                                         As seasons change 
                                     watch the dazzling colours
                             Oaks turn a deep warm reddish brown
                             Inspiration for deepening the thoughts
                               tempting and flirtatious heartbeats
                                        Chaotic scenes ensue
                                           Guilt falls heavily
                                    when foliage etch with pain

                                         Pandoras apparitions
                                    Fountains in gloss and glory
                               Journey drifts through golden fields
                                        Pirouettes of beauty
                                      tangled threads of time
                              - slips into a masterpiece, speechless
                                  soothing synchronicity harmony

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Kelli White September 19, 2023 at 12:05 PM Calvin take me away breathtaking beautiful poem. Kelli

John Watt September 11, 2023 at 9:46 AM Anne-Lise, I like how your poem resolves from chaos and conflict into synchronicity and harmony as the seasons change. I love the phrase 'pirouettes of beauty'. Well done, and congratulations on your potd ~ John

Constance La France September 11, 2023 at 12:04 AM Anne-Lise, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, and your POTD honor, I love the image too, Constance

Kim Rodrigues August 28, 2023 at 8:49 PM change watch the dazzling colours Oaks turn a deep warm reddish brown Inspiration for deepening the thoughts…Congratulations on POTD! Autumn is my favorite time of year!

Paula Goldsmith August 27, 2023 at 9:16 AM Back with congratulations on another win. I enjoyed reading it again. Your "Beautiful" is a lovely Fall write/picture. Hugs... Have a blessed/great day....................

Valsa George August 27, 2023 at 8:53 AM Missed seeing this as POTD. Now let me give you Congratulations on your twin victory.... first place winner in the contest and the poet with the honor of POTD. Love and hugs dear Anne.

Christuraj Alex August 26, 2023 at 9:38 PM "Guilt falls heavily when foliage etch with pain" - A great writing. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet August 26, 2023 at 11:13 AM Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win with this lovely poem.

Victor Buhagiar August 25, 2023 at 8:35 AM Well deserved POTD, dear Anne Lise. Hugs.

Lin Lane August 24, 2023 at 11:29 PM Congratulations gladly given to you. Anne/Lisr.

Arthur Vaso August 24, 2023 at 10:07 PM Congrats and i loved the poem! :)

Michael Tor August 24, 2023 at 8:41 PM How beautiful is the imagery created by your words Anne-Lise. Love this one by you. Big Congratulations on Poetry Soups Poem Of The Day...

Mark Toney August 24, 2023 at 7:51 PM Anne-Lise, your poem is an “Inspiration for deepening the thoughts.” Congratulations on Poem of the Day!

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 24, 2023 at 7:41 PM Heartfelt congratulations on your POTD, Anne-Lise. A gorgeous poem, and a fave for me. Blessings and hugs. :)

Brandy Nicole August 24, 2023 at 6:52 PM As Summer sweetly says goodbye, and Autumn agrees to arrive, so gracefully; it's a beautiful moment indeed. The way seasons serenade, is sensational. You've created a Masterpiece, Anne-Lise. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Anne-Lise Andresen August 28, 2023 at 6:23 AM - Many thanks Brandy, for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Eve Roper August 24, 2023 at 6:10 PM Back with congratulations on POTD! Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2023 at 1:56 AM - Many thanks for coming back with your congratulations, Eve :) - hugs

John Lawless August 24, 2023 at 6:05 PM "Journey drifts through golden fields" WOW....one word to encapsulate a seasons passing....masterful.... Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2023 at 1:56 AM - Thank you so much, John :) - hugs

Akkina Downing August 24, 2023 at 3:09 PM Back with a BIG smile to congratulate you on POTD my beautiful poetess friend. Simply BEAUTIFUL! :) hugs~ Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2023 at 1:55 AM - Many thanks for coming back with your congratulations and BIG smile, Akkina :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds August 24, 2023 at 2:37 PM Beautiful poetry Anne-Lise, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2023 at 1:54 AM - Many thanks Belle, for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2023 at 2:09 PM Congratulations on your "Beautiful" POTD win. A lovely Fall write. The seasons will change soon. I love this write and the Fall time of the year. Hugs... Have a great day...................... Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2023 at 1:53 AM - Paula, many thanks for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes August 24, 2023 at 2:07 PM Back with heartiest congratulations. So glad this was aptly rewarded with POTD. Hugs ! Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2023 at 1:52 AM - Many thanks for coming back with your congratulations, S.V. :) - hugs

Ink Empress August 24, 2023 at 12:07 PM Absolutely stunning poem, well deserved POTD. Congratulations Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2023 at 1:52 AM - Many thanks Ink, for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Arlo Parker August 24, 2023 at 11:44 AM POTD 2 b sur!! :-)) Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2023 at 12:52 PM 2 b sur!! :-)) (?)

Heidi Sands August 24, 2023 at 10:55 AM Congratulations for this brilliant POTD. Enjoy :) Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2023 at 1:50 AM - Heidi, many thanks for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

I Am Anaya August 24, 2023 at 10:36 AM Every year, there's that indescribable feeling I get when autumn shows its beautiful self "flirtatious heartbeat" "foliage etch with pain" just two examples you have harmonized and adequately described with colorful undertones in autumns unique change. Thank you for sharing your wisdom, poetess, Congratulations on your stunning POTD Anne-Lise! Xhugs ~Anaya Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2023 at 1:50 AM - Autumn tells its time ... it is not my favorite season ... but colorful and beautiful ... thank you for your comment and congratulations, Anaya :) - hugs

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