Beautiful

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Written on August 22, 2023

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Lying quietly, on the edges of a prayer, the beautiful only seen by the heart – It is like a tear that bleeds quietly through the eyes who have seen grace more pure and potent than the mind can fathom. ~ quote by poet Trembling dreams erase all that’s lost Like sun rising to meet with frost Consider the beauty, the hope Shedding darkness so hearts can cope Gentle stars the night won’t exhaust Trembling dreams erase all that’s lost Signs of beauty singing soul songs Praising One to whom praise belongs Faith, so humble, sings of His light Glistening softly on the night Trembling dreams erase all that’s lost Not so mighty as Pentecost I seek and I find, Perfect love The Son shining down from above Beauty within, my heart is crossed Trembling dreams erase all that’s lost

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/27/2023 9:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely quote/write/picture. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed/great day.............

Valsa George

Date: 8/27/2023 8:59:00 AM

When there is love within, everything will appear exponentially beautiful. The poem is so adorable with sincerity and fervency of emotions. Rejoice you sweet child of God. Congratulations on your top win.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/26/2023 9:35:00 PM

"I seek and I find, Perfect love The Son shining down from above" - Great writing. Congratulations!

Tom Woody

Date: 8/22/2023 7:11:00 AM

Praising one to whom the praise belongs... I couldn't agree more. Less and less popular these days, but who cares? Awesome quartern

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/22/2023 3:47:00 AM

On the edges of a prayer, your faith shines through. Such a wistful Quatern, with your chosen repeated line being so strong as trembling dreams erase all that’s lost. This is truly beautiful Gina. Best wishes from SV

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/22/2023 3:27:00 AM

Oh my, what a beautifully faithful and embracing piece that radiates serenity whilst weaving a scenery of emotions and vulnerability.. "Sun rising to meet with frost" Gorgeously knitted.. "It is like a tear that bleeds quickly through the eyes who have seen grace more pure and potent than the mind can fathom" That moved my soul.. Surrendering to the Almighty, to shed away the darkness and metamorphose into a new self.. I can feel different feelings here, love this! Hugs - Hiya :)

Tom Woody
Date: 8/22/2023 7:12:00 AM

Great comment Hiya