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Be Good

The sun blazed down the air was hot and humid, throats were dry and hot. After drinking what seemed like a gallon of water one thought came to mind Ice cream. The idea revolved from my brain so much so, I could taste the flavours strawberry, black cherry, toffee. My will power was waning I knew I must resist. Was due to weigh in at slimming world would have to confess my sin I must be good I must I, my will power is gross. Sorry, being good wasn't on my menu the melted ice cream ran down my chin was sooooo good, will be good tomorrow. Penned 25/7/2015

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Date: 7/31/2015 3:01:00 PM
Congratulation on your awesome win..........A.M.
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Date: 7/31/2015 8:29:00 AM
Ha ha, resistance is Futile! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/31/2015 7:32:00 AM
That was soo good! Nicely done!
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Date: 7/31/2015 1:21:00 AM
Nice win. SK
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Date: 7/30/2015 11:46:00 PM
hee heeee, great write, you dribbly sinner. Well done, Seren, Viv x
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Date: 7/30/2015 11:10:00 PM
Congrats on ur brilliant winning poem Seren! Great work!
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Date: 7/25/2015 3:19:00 AM
OH I totally can relate! My biggest weakness is ice cream ! Loved your poem and good luck in the contest!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/25/2015 4:34:00 AM
Lol glad someone else is.....Seren

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