Brenda Meier-Hans Poet Limerick

Be Careful What You Hook

I once heard of a fisher Luciano,
  who sang bass as he played on his piano.
  Once he fished and cast his line
  by mistake hooked his behind
  since that day, when he plays he sings soprano.

  How many syllables.com
  11, 11, 7, 7, 11
  
  11.11.2014
  Sponsor Roy Jerden
  Limericks Clean and Clever

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Terry O'Leary December 7, 2014 at 1:59 PM This was very funny & clever, Brenda!! Brenda Meier-Hans December 8, 2014 at 8:16 AM Thanks so much Terry

Arthur Vaso November 22, 2014 at 9:28 PM Hilarious!!! Loved this one! Brenda Meier-Hans December 8, 2014 at 8:15 AM Thank you Arthur.

Jack Ellison November 17, 2014 at 10:51 AM YEEHAW! got a kick out of this one dear Brenda! Still chuckling... loving huggsies! XXX Brenda Meier-Hans November 18, 2014 at 7:07 PM Thanks Jack. I'm glad to give you a laugh once.

Eileen Manassian November 17, 2014 at 9:27 AM Oh dear oh dear oh dear! ;) Good one! Poor guy. Lovely poem, my dear. Good luck in the contest. Brenda Meier-Hans November 18, 2014 at 7:06 PM Thanks Eileen.

Carolyn Devonshire November 16, 2014 at 4:00 PM Oh boy, did I laugh out loud reading this one, Brenda!!!! I fish and have hooked many things - rocks, bridges, even my own shirt. But at least I'm not singing "soprano." Best wishes in Roy's contest! Love it! Love you, Carolyn Brenda Meier-Hans November 18, 2014 at 7:05 PM Thanks so much Carolyn.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 15, 2014 at 12:02 AM Hey Brenda this is great. Oh poor Luciano love XXXX RAJAT Brenda Meier-Hans November 18, 2014 at 7:05 PM Thanks Rajat

Jasmine Cruz November 13, 2014 at 9:18 PM lol very good Brenda good luck in contest Brenda Meier-Hans November 14, 2014 at 9:11 AM Thank you Jasmine.

Sara Kendrick November 13, 2014 at 4:25 PM Way to go..Reads like a winner to me..I imagine that was a high note that he hit..Thanks for the visit to my page..The doctor assures us that his vision will gradually come back over a period of a few days..Sara Brenda Meier-Hans November 13, 2014 at 6:55 PM Thanks Sara and that is great news.

James Fraser November 12, 2014 at 3:18 PM Haha, love it Brenda. You have me chuckling, James :) Brenda Meier-Hans November 12, 2014 at 7:43 PM Thanks James

Paul Callus November 12, 2014 at 1:22 PM Wow! wow! clever....witty...winner!!! Falsetto??!! LoL :) Brenda.a.a.a.a.a:) // paul Brenda Meier-Hans November 12, 2014 at 7:42 PM Ah, thanks Paul.

Nette Onclaud November 12, 2014 at 8:50 AM laughing out loud, Brenda... what a fun limerick!.. huggs Brenda Meier-Hans November 12, 2014 at 9:29 AM Thanks so much Nette

Tim Smith November 11, 2014 at 9:08 PM I winced......it hurts to think about..On that note I'll tuck myself into bed :) ..hugs Tim Brenda Meier-Hans November 12, 2014 at 9:26 AM Thanks Tim

Shadow Hamilton November 11, 2014 at 5:10 PM so witty and very funny love it Brenda a 7 and a fav gl in contest hugs Brenda Meier-Hans November 11, 2014 at 6:48 PM Thank you so much for your kind comment Shadow.

Faye Gibson November 11, 2014 at 4:54 PM This is hilarious...love it. I can see that line whipping through the air. Brenda Meier-Hans November 11, 2014 at 5:07 PM I'm glad it made you laugh Faye. Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich November 11, 2014 at 4:01 PM you have a fantastic ending on yours and that is what makes the limerick a success!!! Good one. Brenda Meier-Hans November 11, 2014 at 4:10 PM Thanks Andrea.

David Meade November 11, 2014 at 3:05 PM Ouch!! I could feel that one. Nicely done! Brenda Meier-Hans November 11, 2014 at 3:36 PM Teehee.

Casarah Nance November 11, 2014 at 2:47 PM haha thats funny, good one ! Brenda Meier-Hans November 11, 2014 at 3:35 PM Thanks Casarah

Dorian Petersen Potter November 11, 2014 at 1:23 PM A Very witty and clever limerick you've penned here Brenda. Very humorous. Enjoyed it! GL in the contest:) a 7 for you! love and hugs! xxxx D. Brenda Meier-Hans November 11, 2014 at 3:35 PM Thank you Dorian.

Jan Allison November 11, 2014 at 1:02 PM lol Brenda- good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx Brenda Meier-Hans November 11, 2014 at 1:07 PM I hope it's clean enough LOL