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Bathroom Thinking

Obsession and some Barbasol so occupy my sink A razor and a toothbrush and some Colgate too I think A bar of soap, a washcloth, oops, there’s perfume there as well And some dainties hanging on the door that makes my head now swell The image in the mirror’s not as young as it used to be But still there is some promise on the face that I do see I might be in my forties, but I still think there’s some youth Left within the mirror , a face that bares some proof I stand and look around in this tiny bright commode And realize, it’s just a place that exists in my abode For all the rooms, they hold me, or a presence of the me The man there in the mirror, the youthful guy, I see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/13/2009 6:17:00 AM
Great write Michael. I'd hate to describe my bathroom...I've got cats...and I don't mind looking in the mirror except when I turn on the lights...lol
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Date: 2/13/2009 12:22:00 AM
Thanks for your welcome observation on my recent blogs Michael.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/12/2009 2:46:00 PM
This is great, I think we all sometimes look in the mirror, and wonder where that yourhful body went. I do....love this write, always, Christy
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Date: 2/12/2009 2:46:00 PM
love this write. age is just mental hahaha
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Date: 2/12/2009 1:10:00 PM
Hey, Mike, I've been looking in that mirror too. At 80 I am having trouble finding the youth you speak of. I like this one, so young at heart. Love, daver
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Date: 2/12/2009 1:10:00 PM
Oh to be 40ish...smile. This is wonderful and funny . BG
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Date: 2/12/2009 12:35:00 PM
Michael this is a wonderful rhyme. The cadence is beautiful and I love the story. Why does it seem like we do mostof our "self recflectng in the bathroom? Thank you for all your thoughtful comments, Michael
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Date: 2/12/2009 11:48:00 AM
Michael I reckon we all have them moments - I reckon "Old" varies from person to person - What may be old to some will be young to others - All things in life are held to our perspective view and many of us will see things the exact opposite of what others will see - It's just our nature - God bless, MJ
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Date: 2/12/2009 11:30:00 AM
REAL GOOD POEM. deen MEANS 'FAITH OR RELIGION' Yasmin
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Date: 2/12/2009 11:04:00 AM
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS you sillypoohead. Im right there with ya. Best thing about the 40's is I can't see my wrinkles without my contacts so I brush my teeth before I put them in and it ain't all bad. Fun Stuff Michael.
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