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Bao - Yu

<                                         Bao - Yu
                                        precious jade
                                    your angelic font 
                                  cast mirrored images
                                      off stilled pond


                                  orchids in woven hair
                                  garments of satin and lace
                                  you lying in fetal position
                                  upon granite's stone
                                  tell me heavenly Goddess


                                  Why Do You Look So Sad  ?




Written By Katherine Stella

For Rambling Poet's
Reflection Contest 

G.L. ALL

Name Of This Poem 
Is Entitled
Bao -Yu

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/2/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations Katherine on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 3/1/2011 1:45:00 PM
why, Katherine,this is just lovely!! glad to finally see it. congratulations to you.
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Katherine in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2011 6:58:00 PM
, Good to see you in the top 10, Katherine. Congratulations on your worthy poem's 10th place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:18:00 AM
Congrats Katherine my friend on your wonderful win in the Reflections contest with a super entry ...so happy to be sharing the winners list with a good friend and great talent luv.. hope all is well..
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Date: 2/26/2011 5:09:00 AM
Interesting work..Sara
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Date: 2/25/2011 11:22:00 PM
good result in the contest with this piece Katherine, all the best.
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Date: 2/25/2011 7:51:00 PM
Wonderful write with a completely different approach!Congrats Katherine on your well deserved win!----kashinath
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:40:00 PM
katherine.. a unique wirte! CONGRATS to you!:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:02:00 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Constance, katherine
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:57:00 PM
Congratulations on winning with this fine entry, Katherine.
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Date: 2/19/2011 6:47:00 PM
Not much seen on Ps , Katherine. hope everything is alright. enjoyed the interpretation on the picture,
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Date: 2/19/2011 6:15:00 PM
Creative use of imagery to give the reader something to ponder about. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing and sharing your words!!!! Karen
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Date: 2/19/2011 4:53:00 PM
with such beauty sadness should not take place, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:31:00 AM
Interesting and descriptive presentation. Looks like a good one for the reflection contest.
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Date: 2/19/2011 9:07:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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