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Bang, Bang

BANG, BANG! Bang, bang it ought to be, Bang, bang it must be he, Bang, bang there’s no maybe, Bang, bang for all to see. Bang, bang he’ll hit the ground, Bang, bang a fearless sound, Bang, bang a freedom found, Bang, bang it must be bound. Bang, bang no one will cry, Bang, bang he's a no good guy, Bang, bang the time is nigh, Bang, bang his soul in hell will fry! Bang, bang his skin is pink, Bang, bang he’s not in sync, Bang, bang his tweets must sink, Bang, bang his attitude does stink. Bang, bang he thinks he’s swell, Bang, bang he can’t be well, Bang, bang we all can tell, Bang, bang he makes life hell. Bang, bang does not consider words, Bang, Bang they come out just like turds, Bang, bang always the dark he hurts, Bang, bang by hateful racist spurts! Bang, bang it soon will be his day, Bang, bang his blonde will grey, Bang, bang deserves it ,come what may, For killing thousands he must pay! INSPIRED BY NANCY SINATRA SONG – BANG BANG …….. G, BANG!

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/13/2020 3:04:00 PM

A difficult topic as there are many who support this President.( I’m not one of them) I do wonder why so many support him. I guess the will of the people will speak in November.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/18/2020 6:50:00 AM

Hi Rick sorry for not answering sooner but we were busy with the consultancy we run from home - we place nursing sisters. He lies Rick blatantly and then twists what he said which is almost always rude, to mean otherwise - manipulative or perhaps Alzheimer's has got the better of him. Hugs, Jenny.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/10/2020 7:07:00 AM

Caught on to the song straight away, Jenny...though I must admit that my initial assumption was Cher:) I am all for unity and have no sympathy for those who sow division. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/10/2020 10:37:00 AM

Hi Paul, congratulations once again on your POTD. I agree Paul, that is why I felt I needed this poem to be stern! Thank-you for commenting, Warm regards and hugs, Jenny.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 8:44:00 PM

Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/9/2020 2:49:00 AM

Thank-you Funom, I'm very glad you read it and thank you for an awesome answer. I feel strongly about equality, it must circumference the whole world. As long as I have a home, enough food and clothes and our small business which we work very hard for from home to sustain, I'm happy. Stay safe. Blessings, Jennifer.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/4/2020 8:52:00 PM

Hello Jennifer … the world of humanity is going through a terrible time at this time with very little positive news presented, so instead of calming situations it's inciting them. There doesn't appear to be a leader who wants to lead using common sense, but there's always hope - thank you for this fine verse Jennifer - Lindsay

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/7/2020 11:21:00 AM

Quite right Lindsay, instead of calming a situation, and explaining how sad you feel (common sense) they exasperate things and fuel and stoke a passive protest into a possible riotous march. Thank-you for such a relevant comment. Blessings, Jennifer.

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/3/2020 8:30:00 AM

Your BANG on dear sister...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/8/2020 9:00:00 AM

Wingster my good friend - glad you think I'm bang on - I think many not only in America, but globally would agree with us! Love and blessings, Jennster.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/2/2020 11:30:00 PM

Such strength in your poetry Jennifer, so many twists and turns in the world today. Surely there is enough intellect to know what is right and wrong..or is there?

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/8/2020 9:03:00 AM

Some in high place have not enough intellect and others not even noticed , could do so well and have intellect. Thank-you Harry for a wonderful comment - Blessings my friend. From a Yorkshire Lass!

David Mchattie

Date: 6/2/2020 3:16:00 PM

I'm a Canadian so I don't have a horse in this race. But poetry and comedy have one thing in common. They both fail when they come off as mean. Have a great day my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/3/2020 2:59:00 AM

Good that you are Canadian, - all the more reason what you should not really care that much for him.We are all unique individuals, and for the fist time the discontent American public have grouped to express their Sympathy for Floyd but also their anger which has reached boiling point and now split over. If he was man enough he could stop all of this in in one speech - but his authority has gone to his head and he has advocated racial contempt through the American system. Poetry is never mean, it is feeling of wanting to express onself. May God forgive him one - Best wishes. Jennifer.

Elaine George

Date: 6/1/2020 8:47:00 AM

YES! He is a very negative soul~Elaine

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/8/2020 9:10:00 AM

Every time he is in front of a mike, he is insulting, whether to an individual, an organisation or a country - he hasn't got many allies that's for sure! Thanks for your comment Elaine - keep safe my friend, Jennifer.

Joseph May

Date: 5/31/2020 9:35:00 PM

He has divided the country, true words Jennifer

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/8/2020 9:17:00 AM

He certainly has Joseph - very sad, but I don;t envy the next man or woman who comes in after him, he/she has a messy job to clean up hiss mess! Thak-you Joseph - blessings my friend, Jennifer.

Ann Foster

Date: 5/31/2020 9:30:00 AM

this was great!!! oh and a second book.. and a third... and.. go girl... Ann

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/10/2020 10:41:00 AM

Ann my dear friend, I have answered your lovely comment twice, but, you know my bad habit, I often forget to validate - love ya. Blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/31/2020 9:06:00 AM

Please see soup mail. Thanks, Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/8/2020 9:25:00 AM

Thanks Gershon - it is up to God - thinking of America a great deal, many important decisions to be made. Blessings, Jennifer.

Silent One

Date: 5/31/2020 6:36:00 AM

Trump is an idiot.. and i love that song... Bang Bang you shot me down... I do not even know if Trump has condemned the killing.. it seems he cares not for minorities in the so called land of the free... Great poem my friend..

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/8/2020 9:31:00 AM

Thank-you SO - he is so publically condemning of almost everything, like a spoilt rich child, (that he is) but old, he must have his own way, no communication, no dialogue - very dictatorial, Thank-you for a spot on comment my friend, blessings, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/31/2020 5:28:00 AM

Wow! The title caught my eye! You did this well!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/8/2020 9:36:00 AM

Thank-you Kim - all of us outside America, still care for America, he is a true dictator! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/30/2020 11:32:00 PM

He does make life hell, Jennifer, enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 5/31/2020 10:21:00 AM

Thank you Eve, he has for the whole world! Thanks you for a great comment my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 5/30/2020 1:25:00 PM

How doing Jen Bang , Bang Ever seen the BBC documentary or heard of the Bang Bang Club about media photographer's during the apartheid era. Nice work enjoyed reading

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/8/2020 9:39:00 AM

I looked it up Christopher - very interestsing, but this idiot has insulted countires, individual, organisations, minorities I could go on forever, hopefully it will all stop in November! Glad you enjoyed the poem. Blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/30/2020 11:55:00 AM

Hello Jennifer Proxendos,Yes he must pay. People shoild learn to get along with other people, without the bang-bang! Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/8/2020 9:43:00 AM

Sure he must pay, he has divided the United states of America - no one really likes him and all he does is fire people that work for him and insult countries and organisations. Take care my friend, Love Jennifer.