Banana Split

Split my banana and stuff it with cream
top with tantalizing treats to extreme
	nuts and silky sweetened balls
	gooey toppings form seawalls
nothing left out of a lover's wet dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Allison Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 4:01 PM
omg Linda I wish I had thought of this one that final line is just beyond hilarious!!! adding this to my faves!! hugs jan xx
Fowler Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 6:40 AM
Hahaha Jan. You are an inspiration. Many thanks for the comments and fav! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 1:23 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write again. Have a great day/week.......................
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 1:29 PM
Many thanks my friend Paula! :)
Anaya Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Oh my, nothing left for the imagination. Haha, brilliant Linda, came off well bff.
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:38 PM
There you are bff! Good to see you! Thanks for the comments ;);)
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:37 PM
Thank you dear Sara. Thanks for the congrats. Have a wonderful day! :)
Radice Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 10:51 PM
I'm not sure I'll be able to eat or order one of these ever again without laughing out loud. :) Cheers - Gary
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:34 PM
Hahaha Gary. If that's true, my job here s done. Thanks for stopping and commenting! :)
Merryman Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:28 PM
My, my, my! Delightfully sweet! Congrats on your win, Linda! Blessings, Kim M
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Hi Kim. Many thanks for your visit and congrats! :)
Kitchin Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 4:46 PM
Linda, congratulations on your winning placement, a creative and very bawdy one!
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Thank you Tania. I enjoyed this fun contest of yours! :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 10:07 PM
oh my. way to do banana split!
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:31 PM
Thanks Andrea. I always appreciate your visits and comments. :)
George Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 9:09 PM
Yummy treat. Humorous and sweet. Beautiful entry for the contest. All the Best dear Linda !
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:30 PM
Hello Valsa my friend. Thanks for commenting! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 10:16 AM
A fun write. I also did this one. Have a good day..........................
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:30 PM
Hey Paula, and I enjoyed your entry as well. Thanks for stopping by with comments. Have a blessed day!
Edmonds  Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 6:36 AM
An ice cream dream, I know what you mean. Hilarious Linda, who could top that… Belle
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:29 PM
Yes, Belle, a very real dream for ice cream lovers! Thanks for your comments and support! :)
Read Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 1:14 AM
Hi Linda,I was licking my lips until the last line.love your sense of humor.xx
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:28 PM
Hey John. I'm glad you enjoyed this write. Hope you got a laugh or two! Thanks for stopping by and commenting! :)
Volumes Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 6:21 PM
I was thinking oh yummmmmmmmmm til you got to the wet dream, and I fear I just wouldn't be able to swallow.. but I did laugh in spite of myself !!!!
Volumes Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 9:24 PM
:) I still think its a winner !
Fowler Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 7:33 PM
LOL Svvie. You crack me up! Ice cream lovers beware! Thanks for stopping by.
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