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above the rainbow... silent as the mouse cursor across google earth Entered Balloons Poetry Contest Sponsor Anthony Biaanco 7th Feb 2023

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/23/2023 4:11:00 AM

Good Morning hh. This is so lovely and very peaceful. It has much imagery. Truly. Thank you for sharing. May this day find you well and may today be a good day for you. Blessings always.

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 2/21/2023 6:59:00 PM

Lovely and made me smile as its so relevant today!

Bill Baker

Date: 2/12/2023 7:11:00 AM

Nice entry, Harry, good luck! I liked the imagery. Have a great week my friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2023 5:27:00 AM

Question is what is their motive? I think it is sinister. Thanks for sharing this contest entry with us and your visit to my poem. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/8/2023 10:03:00 AM

- Excellently written, Harry - hugs

Fin Chuuk

Date: 2/7/2023 9:29:00 PM

Magnificent, Harry!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2023 1:06:00 PM

now that is FANTASTIC as a haiku. Wow.

Jim Slaughter

Date: 2/7/2023 11:13:00 AM

This should do very well in the contest, Harry. I love "google earth".

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/7/2023 8:00:00 AM

A beautiful and meaningful poem, Harry! Your great imagery shed more beauty on this poem. Good luck with the contest

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/7/2023 6:43:00 AM

Perfect image for that balloon…silent and deadly!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/7/2023 5:57:00 AM

Silently they scan the earth--skillfully delivered, Harry. Stay well my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/7/2023 2:29:00 AM

Perfect senryu. We might just travel around beautiful vistas.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/6/2023 11:59:00 PM

these Chinese get everywhere. xx

Michael Tor

Date: 2/6/2023 9:39:00 PM

The high tech balloon my friend. Love the theme Harry...

Valsa George

Date: 2/6/2023 8:55:00 PM

Wow... beautiful Senryu, dear harry. With the google cursor, we travel through the breadth and width of the earth as if buoyed up on a balloon ride!