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In the predawn light that has filled my room A dreamlike state transcends the gloom This is the hour I would lie all alone Yet, I'm tossed like a leaf from the flannel down riding a wave, to a place in the sun The family is sleeping, I am free as a bird.. Swept by the sound, that no other has heard No other can feel the winds from the past that sweep me away, to a world made of glass I'm caught in a childhood, of the vaporous air It has swallowed me whole, in a bright sequined glare Something magnetic, below, from my bed is murmuring words, holding me there I know it is cunning, I know it is wise But temptation entices to fly to the sky I hear my age thunder, as it tries to pull down and bury me under to the place that I've known Here under the canopy of a million bright suns Without hesitation, or a fear I don't know I am lit by the bleach of those lights from before I know in this moment, there's a child that I am Leaves from the windstorm whirl past my feet And I'm back in my bed, tucked into the sheets but knowing a childhood is waiting for me
________________________________________________ For Deb's Contest: Image #2 4/27/14

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Date: 4/30/2014 7:13:00 PM
you dleight my senses, carrie.. so well- composed!.. sweet congrats on your shining win!.. huggs
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Date: 4/30/2014 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful poem many congratulations on your fine win. Jan xx
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Date: 4/30/2014 2:06:00 AM
Great write on Rock My world contest. Congrats on the win. carrie
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Date: 4/29/2014 5:58:00 PM
Beautiful Carrie... Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest... Verlena
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Date: 4/28/2014 8:15:00 AM
Carrie! AWESOME! You just FLEW with this write. I saw the image and it was a great challenge for me to try to come up with the words. You have done superbly well. Beautiful...I love the third stanza...resonates with me. Some trips that we take, we take alone! :)
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