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Early morning, while walking down the country road I saw a group of children, school bound in crisp uniforms Oh it is August, I suddenly remembered And the schools have opened after the summer holidays Like birds unleashed from the cage, With satchels on their back, talking merrily Shouting at times in rising elation Without a care, they walked down the lane Seeing them, my world sank into a chasm of memories Remembered my school days when I walked on foot With my friends every morn to the school, close by Though bored by the onerous rite of waking up early And studying subjects we hardly had any interest Life altogether was a new adventure And on every day we learnt something new At recess, we would grow into a disorderly mass Laugh and play. Oh, what joy we always had! But how fast those happy days ended, Plunging me into an abyss of nostalgic remembrance. Seeing those children in school uniforms, Heading to school to study, play and have fun Thoughts fall like feathers of moulting birds and reel round me. How the memories of school life make me smile And how I long to be a student again just for a while! August.26.2022 Back to School Poetry Contest Sponsor- Francine Roberts Total lines-24

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Date: 9/22/2022 11:26:00 AM
Valsa, I loved reading your story of how seeing a group of school children ignited your nostalgic memories of school days. Congrats for your high placement ~ John
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Date: 9/21/2022 3:00:00 PM
I forgot to say I love your last two lines... Ann
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Date: 9/21/2022 2:57:00 PM
Dear Valsa, Your poem is just beautiful. So full of memories. Congratulations on your big win!
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Date: 9/21/2022 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Valsa! Linda
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Date: 9/21/2022 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement, Valsa.
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Date: 9/21/2022 1:47:00 AM
A bunch of wistful memories there, Valsa. I hated school and couldn’t wait to leave. So maybe I envy you your fond memories. Congrats on your win. Terry
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Date: 9/20/2022 7:29:00 PM
Nostalgically narrates the school days and school life. Group of children going to school have taken your to imagination-heights. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/2/2022 2:05:00 PM
It's fun to look back on those days as a young student, sometimes remembering the goods times and sometimes remmebering the struggles. Each year it's a whole new beginning for each child. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your creative poetry, Valsa. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 8/27/2022 9:00:00 PM
Wistfully thinking back on the carefree days of one's youth with a delighted smile. Valsa, you have a wonderful writing style, and this piece is just great. I wish you the best.
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Date: 8/26/2022 11:10:00 AM
Class reunions are a big deal in Hawai'i, but I have never been to one as school was just a break from work for me! Enjoy your happy memories! Aloha!
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Date: 8/26/2022 5:39:00 AM
Delightfully reminiscing in the happy days of childhood. A lovely write, Valsa, in your gifted style. Best to you.
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Date: 8/26/2022 4:58:00 AM
Yes. wouldn't that be fun... to be back in school, so young? Love this - God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/26/2022 1:57:00 AM
This makes me sad. My school days were nothing much to speak of. Best forgotten. Still I loved your poem which as usual iis so very well written.
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