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Baby Face

Why did not you cross the black river and remained innocent ? Unhealed, failed inside, broken and honest ? You won the race, the space, the heaven. Moving away to the farthest blackness. Your god sits crosslegged, clotting. Brown hands on white shoulders, boneless move in circle. Deportation of words opens the green wounds. Birds carry the snow on the wings. I was confused, wanted to love my broken vowels, for absolute you and me. The baby face pops up again in my perfection, speechless. SATISH VERMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/26/2009 1:35:00 PM
NICE...Congrats on the featue Satish....:JP}
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Date: 7/26/2009 12:33:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this past week Bill.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/25/2009 9:52:00 AM
Satish, you have a style all your own. Congratulations on "Baby Face" being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/24/2009 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured. Sara
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:45:00 PM
Very interesting poetry. Congratulations on this featured fruit of labor. Ernilando
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Date: 7/19/2009 4:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem, good form too! Laura :)
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Date: 7/19/2009 3:37:00 PM
Very interesting ABC. Congratulations on your selection. ill
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature this week>>James
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:31:00 PM
Much for the reader to ponder in your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/19/2009 1:56:00 PM
Satish, Congratulations on your featured write. Love, Carol
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