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There are two little angels in heaven that wait for me, and in this earthly realm, I bring white roses to their tomb and weep; in my last gasp- my angels will come fluttering to me. I remember each death, each baby I had to bury, bowing my head I hummed a lullaby that echoed in the trees; floating among the headstones and solemn statues weeping. I was broken and shattered and thought my life was hopeless, and was so empty and my heart was heavy with grief and with tears; in my last gasp- my angels will come fluttering to me. _______________________________ December 31, 2015 Poetry/Sijo/Baby Angels Copyright Protected, ID 12-740-255-31 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Angels sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron, Judged /2016 First Place Submitted to the Standard contest, Your Best Sijo sponsor, William Kekaula, Judged 10/13/2021 First Place

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Date: 10/15/2021 1:48:00 PM
I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2021 2:05:00 PM
Sara, thanks for the compliment and congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/13/2021 11:19:00 PM
A poignant piece, Constance, the depth of which is immeasurable, yet, its intensity is far-reaching. Heart-wrenching that time's healing energy will be realized, my friend! Blessings, Aloha!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/14/2021 8:51:00 AM
William, thank you so much for the contest and my wonderful placement and for the lovely compliment and comment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/13/2021 11:14:00 PM
Great work like your other works. How nice a feeling it is that angels are watching over us! Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/14/2021 8:52:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 1/8/2016 5:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your fabulous poem. You have a gentle heart and those angels will be watching over you, Broken Wings. I feel an earthly sadness in your words but also a spiritual longing. Best Wishes. Hugs, Andrew.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/8/2016 8:25:00 PM
Andrew, thanks for visiting and for the fabulous, yes, I do have an earthly sadness, that is so true ~
Date: 1/6/2016 2:40:00 AM
A very sad piece. I hope it's fiction. Well, congrats for your placement in the contest, Broken Wings! ;-)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 3:13:00 AM
Teddy thanks for the congrats, sadly it is not fiction ~
Date: 1/6/2016 12:43:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 1:00:00 AM
Thank you Linda
Date: 1/3/2016 11:26:00 PM
BROKEN, Congratulations on your "Angel" win. **SKAT**
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Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 9:18:00 AM
Skat, thanks for the congratulations
Date: 1/3/2016 3:56:00 PM
I am so sorry for the pain you have to endure. But it must be. There is no explanation. The way you think about it is beautiful. What a beautiful heart you have!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 9:19:00 AM
Duke, thanks for the visit, the nice comment and the beautiful ~
Date: 1/3/2016 11:38:00 AM
I know the feeling.... Congratulations
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Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 9:20:00 AM
Pashang, something we share, and thanks for the congratulations ~
Date: 1/2/2016 4:56:00 PM
This is so special Broken Wings..thank you for sharing your intimate emotions on such a difficult subject..God bless lovely lady...-luloo
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Constance La France
Date: 1/3/2016 1:34:00 AM
Thanks for visiting Laura and your compassionate comment, oh why does life have to be so cruel, I am forever shattered inside ~
Date: 1/2/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your two little angels with us. Beautiful poem! Love from Jean
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Constance La France
Date: 1/2/2016 2:36:00 PM
Jean thanks for visiting my poem appreciated and thanks for the beautiful
Date: 1/2/2016 1:36:00 PM
I am sad fo your loss. Love, J
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Constance La France
Date: 1/2/2016 1:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Joyce for your compassion
Date: 1/2/2016 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement! Well-deserved win! :)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/2/2016 7:38:00 AM
Hans, thanks so much for visiting my poem with congratulations and the compliment, appreciate ~
Date: 1/1/2016 11:41:00 PM
Constance,please...... Congrats on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/2/2016 2:56:00 AM
Balveen, thanks so much for the congrats, appreciate your compassion ~
Date: 1/1/2016 9:54:00 PM
Heartfelt write Constance. Congratulations on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/2/2016 2:56:00 AM
Michael, thanks for visiting and the congratulations, appreciate ~
Date: 1/1/2016 8:30:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/2/2016 2:55:00 AM
Nayda, thank you so much for my placement in your contest, I am honored ~
Date: 12/31/2015 5:06:00 PM
beautiful and touching
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Constance La France
Date: 12/31/2015 10:30:00 PM
Sage, thanks for the beautiful, I love that word ~
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Date: 12/31/2015 5:08:00 PM
and HNY

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