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One day I will see my baby, So sad he had to fly above; I ask God why and cry sadly, My boy is way up- oh the love. Oh God, a mom so lonely, The sad I will not get rid of; One day I will see my baby, So sad he had to fly away. I see him in my arm at night, I lay him on the bed- delight; Him and me are one till daylight. Go now my boy, see you darling, Son, one day mom will be flying; Oh God, end this sea of grieving. ______________________ March 17, 2016 Poetry/Funom's Sonnet/Baby Copyright Protected, ID 16-769-380-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, The Funom's Sonnet sponsor, Funom Makama Second Place

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:38:00 AM
Broken, nice to see you are doing awesome with the contest sponsored around here... Congrats on your win. LINDA
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Date: 4/28/2016 7:41:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the compliment and the congrats ~|~
Date: 4/26/2016 6:31:00 AM
A very poignant poem very beautifully written. The Funom Sonnet so gloriously written. Congrats on your win, Broken.
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Date: 4/26/2016 4:23:00 PM
Karam, thanks for the beautiful and the congrats !!
Date: 4/25/2016 8:37:00 AM
Deeply emotional to the core of the soul.... Congrats or your top placement, BW!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/25/2016 9:10:00 AM
Teddy thanks for the comment and the congrats
Date: 4/21/2016 4:43:00 PM
Heartfelt but a great write, congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:07:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the congratulations !
Date: 4/21/2016 2:08:00 AM
a heartbreaking poem Constance many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:08:00 AM
Jan, thanks for the congrats and hugs xx
Date: 4/20/2016 10:39:00 PM
Sadly beautiful Broken.. great job n awesome win.. big congrats..
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:08:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the beautiful, the awesome and congrats !!!
Date: 4/20/2016 2:27:00 PM
Oh, Broken Wings, so sad indeed, but so beautifully written as always. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:10:00 AM
Sandra, thanks for the beautiful, the congratulations, the 7 and the hugs !!!!
Date: 4/20/2016 1:21:00 PM
Oh my, another heart wrenching poem that I love..congrats on your placement, well deserved :)-luloo
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:11:00 AM
Laura, thanks for the love and the congrats ~
Date: 4/20/2016 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and thank you very much for giving this very fine entry. The contest had lots of wonderful entries and grading them was a hard nut to crack, nevertheless you came out tops.. Kudos to you and thank you so much once again.
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:13:00 AM
Funom, thank you for that great challenge and for my awesome placement, so appreciated !
Date: 4/10/2016 4:53:00 PM
Beautiful and heartfelt poem it is a first in my heart
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:13:00 AM
Eve thanks for the beautiful ~
Date: 3/20/2016 1:08:00 PM
- No one can feel this without experienced losing a child - a feeling that will be forever in your heart (because, I know!) - Beautifully written, B. W. - I wish you a lovely Easter - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/20/2016 4:29:00 PM
Anne Lise, thanks for the compassion and I am sorry that you know this pain, thanks for the beautiful and the hugs !
Date: 3/18/2016 8:45:00 PM
ohhhhh...sigh..Broken Wings my heart is "broken" as your baby boy wears "wings". I just shed a tear because my heart aches for every minute of pain you have felt. I am so sorry and I wish nothing but the best for you. God bless lovely lady.....-luloo
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Date: 3/19/2016 5:13:00 AM
Laura, thank you so much for that beautiful comment, it is difficult at times for me, sometimes the pain just comes out of nowhere, it does help to write my pain, this is my way of healing, no that the snow is gone, it is time to visit his grave with roses...
Date: 3/18/2016 10:26:00 AM
Sad but beautiful. Is this from a real life experience? I am truly blessed to read some wonderful, wonderful, awesome entry to this contest. You guys are giving me serious pressure on judging your magnificent entries
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Date: 3/18/2016 11:39:00 AM
Funom, thanks for visiting my poem with the beautiful, yes this is from real life, my baby died shortly after birth, it haunts my every moment, I have seen some of the entries for your contest, for sure, it will be difficult to judge, we have some wonderful writers her on the soup ~

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