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Babbit's Sabbath

Babbit’s Sabbath

Sundays still come
  at least once a week
and I look upon them
  as a special treat.
A day set aside
  to give both praise and prayer
opening to the Lord on high
  that I’m still down here.
The struggles both losses and gains
  seem to be the present life’s relief
remnants of youth that remain
  waiting on the final tally sheet.
So after all the years of passing
  solace comes in the silent inner burn
with faith returned and lasting
  reminiscent of the lessons learned.
The knees don’t bend as easily
  but still I make the attempt
bowing my head with wheezing
  asking God I be exempt.
The words slip thru my mind
  blending hope and dreams deeply felt
searching for the God I long to find
  as daily tasks express gratitude for the life I’m dealt.
No work today, no laundry or gardening
  just peace, quiet and reflection
as God grant me pardoning
  for the past wrong directions.
So Lord, here I am on Sunday, Babbit’s Sabbath.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/9/2019 1:02:00 PM
DM, a wonderfully penned poem, I feel your faith shining bright in your words, well done ~
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Date: 1/9/2019 12:54:00 PM
OH, I love this one. I like to have Sunday's as a break day from things to do and I can relate to this. Well written. A fave :)
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Date: 1/9/2019 12:32:00 PM
your faith shines out DM and I love the humour in your Babbit's sabbath poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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