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Written: March 05, 2024 For Edward Ebeh Contest ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh, Hermes, during historical eras of reign, Greek literature thrived—minds free of strain. Let's drift for a jaunt to the heart of Byzantine, Where expertise and insight found their shine. Mercury, with Venus—in art could combine, Creating a world where beauty would shine. But beyond art—power would be found, Force could induce humble axioms to abound.  In bosom of a yoke—a sword would wave, Air stole souls to depths—it would crave. A clairvoyant spirit, subtle and keen, Killed doubts and drowned fears within.  Wrath was unsettled and concealed Oracles,  As nature unveiled its mysteries and miracles. Whatever is in her might be a lambent stream, Azoth's mind intricate, comely, relaxing dream. Her reverberations echo through time and place, From hardy mountains to enclosed space. A power in her vapor, a curb on smoky substance, A spirit of amicable warmth and transmuting essence. Who created life or brought the dream? Who's slight insights and sights does God redeem?  In the sphere beyond time, space, and matter. The cold corridors of time are lost and scatter If you mingle with Azoth—you will cross his wall. You'll arise as a meteoric comet, in meek call Its genesis holds the key to elixir wellness. Wrought oneiric metals that cure deadness. Azoth Mercury elixir vitae—imbue vigor to body, Inspiration and enthusiasm—mind embody. Mysterious and imperfect as the body may be, But flaws it can reform, with equidistant foresee. Reliable for a quest for bodily and mental purity. Ubiquitous nostrum, cure, and elixir of life surity. Included in the 1567 Rosicrucian artwork. The sword pommel is inscribed with Azoth lurk. Heavenly magic sigils and ploys to protect, Against illnesses and injuries, they reflect. Analogous to the dazzle that nature contains, Unabridged insight of stallion cosmos it retains. Used as the philosopher's stone in esoteric lore, Drawings depicting Azoth—its work in alchemy core. Grace in inception and at closing, A widespread stance seems utmost interposing.  Opposites, akin to metal and steam, An embryo of vice in a womb of dream  Azoth, O miserly Azoth—it transforms, From steam to mercurial water, it reforms. Diaphanous putrefaction, chaff from grain, Azoth's alchemical jaunt is an eternal refrain. Through depths of our universe, it will show, Unveiling secrets that only Azoth can bestow.

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Date: 3/19/2024 4:50:00 AM
"If you mingle with Azoth—you will cross his wall. You'll arise as a meteoric comet, in meek call Its genesis holds the key to elixir wellness. Wrought oneiric metals that cure deadness.". Your highly scholarly and erudite poem on Azoth has made my mouth gape in wonder. This is indeed a classic of a poem. You amaze us with your knowledge of the Renaissance and the Byzantine glory. Rich in history, this poem is a masterpiece. It was Paracelsus who used Azoth- a mercurial compound as a universal remedy. Congratulations on your much-deserved win. Proud to share the first place in Edward's contest with your poem.
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Date: 3/19/2024 4:09:00 AM
Not only a stunning piece of work, but very informative as well. This is a masterpiece, Lasaad. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 3/19/2024 12:12:00 AM
Sotto of course your poem is a first place winner! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/6/2024 4:22:00 PM
Sotto Poet, I too have chosen the myth of Azoth, you did it best and so I will bow out. Ibeh should be pleased with so much imagery and compelling historic myth . I liked stanza's 3 & 8 best! B0l
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Date: 3/6/2024 4:29:00 AM
dearest Sotto--I enjoyed your poem's brief "history of thought." The journey brought to mind some of the texts/stories I read during my college days. I had, however, forgotten about Azoth; you shed light on his life and his mystical powers--powers imbued into the sword of Azoth. Loved the imagery in your poem for it added an almost mystical depth to your words. I loved reading this work of poetic art this morning. Have a splendid day, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara (Soup Mail & faving)
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Date: 3/5/2024 4:23:00 PM
SP, this is a very interesting exploration. Azoth could be akin to the holy grail. I wonder what it will do when we actually do find it (if that happens). So many societies have been searching for something. I wonder what we are actually looking for. I would settle for peace and harmony among us all.
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