Awareness

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a hush swept over us like a draft sliding under an old door slowly it made its presence known until our awareness was undeniable our minds were frozen in a state of euphoria a state of being and knowing

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/24/2023 3:02:00 PM

how beautifully you've described awakening and awareness like a draft sliding under an 'old' door...what a fabulous image and metaphor--the old door being us, stuck in our ways. Powerful words, dear hubby. hugs, me

Bill Baker
Date: 12/24/2023 5:50:00 PM

Thank you for the mindful comments, Sara. You're I smart ... and aware cookie! :-) Hugs, Bill

Silent One

Date: 12/24/2023 12:16:00 PM

Very interesting, I guess we all need an awakening of some sort and you have expressed it here very well my friend..

Bill Baker
Date: 12/24/2023 5:49:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments and support, my friend. Bill

Charles Messina

Date: 12/24/2023 8:46:00 AM

If you don't have awareness, you may be lost forever (lol) Good one, Bill. Merry Christmas to you and yours! Charlie

Bill Baker
Date: 12/24/2023 5:48:00 PM

Thank you for the comments, Charlie, and we wish you and yours a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, my friend. Bill and Sara Baker