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Awake At Last - a Darren White Production

Silent nights and sleepy mornings carry your best through our song blown soft in the wind of change. Heart, sweet giving all in which you breathe a gracious gift, freely words of wisdom, encourage the sombre tones of grey beheld but not desired Smiling sun, sleepy still behind marshmallow clouds, sitting low in the sill. Fragrance, sweet perfume caresses me, half asleep, with hands gesturing a patch of fog, shreds of memory, rags ripped in corners tattered but you and I still laugh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/24/2017 7:25:00 PM
A wonderful collaboration! :D You two make a great team <3
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Date: 4/24/2017 7:30:00 AM
Beautiful writing :)
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Date: 4/23/2017 3:57:00 PM
This certainly brings a smile. Encore!
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Date: 4/21/2017 11:57:00 PM
I sit here yearning for MORE!!! Haha. What a wonderful blend of pens this is! Awesome guys!
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Date: 4/21/2017 4:12:00 PM
Good Evening Tim and Darren. I loved the title Awake at Last which is poetic in itself. Better still, I really loved the Darren White Production. How marvelous is that. Very. This is beautiful poetry. Individually you both Tim and Darren are truly top level poets and entries such as this confirms that. Congratulations on your collaboration. Now I give a toast to being awake and alive and specifically a toast to "Awake at Last". Thank you for posting Tim. Well done entirely.
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/21/2017 4:16:00 PM
Cheers Lisa to being alive and awake.
Date: 4/21/2017 3:59:00 PM
can we see many many more productions like this guys your pens flow so beautifully together:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/21/2017 4:15:00 PM
Lol...With the great lines he creates it would be easy
Date: 4/21/2017 3:01:00 PM
ohh, you both make my heart beat!..huggs
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/21/2017 4:14:00 PM
Thanks so much nette
Date: 4/21/2017 2:57:00 PM
A Darren Production :) Smile...You two really created a beautiful poem ..Oh WoW.
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/21/2017 4:14:00 PM
I thought that was fun...He deserves the spotlight...I was lucky to have a little time to add to his lines
Date: 4/21/2017 1:40:00 PM
What a fantastic collaboration, I loved this. Your two styles mesh wonderfully. Bravo both poets.
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/21/2017 4:10:00 PM
Darren has an? uplifting view and I'm honored when he sends me some lines .
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Darren White
Date: 4/21/2017 2:05:00 PM
I love the poem Tim made :) I liked to write the few lines I gave him.
Date: 4/21/2017 1:40:00 PM
Heh, how I love what you have done with those lines! I love it, it's a beautiful poem, my friend :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/21/2017 4:09:00 PM
Thanks for sending them to me. They brought me a smile
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Darren White
Date: 4/21/2017 1:59:00 PM
A Darren White Production LOL

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