Avenue

The chapter I'm writing
starts with this setting
a side street that goes
for a block and ends
at a ravine.
Boxes are stacked
in the hallway.
The crimson trees outside
are still, but I know
something stirs.
The laptop screen glows
as I write. 
I'll close the cover soon
but the story never ends.
A veil of clouds hides the sky.
I'll grab a quick bite
and do my laundry
for something clean to wear.
A birthday card I meant to send
lies on the floor. The friend wrote
that he moved from his house
to assisted living, his life shrinking
from seven rooms to two.
I cried when it rained last night
for a woman I once loved.
It is November
and the weather is changing.
I moved here three weeks ago
and occupied the second floor
to find my time and place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 11/27/2024 7:39:00 PM
Many scenes and happenings are melded together in a harmonious way. Enjoyed this collage of experiences. "I'll grab a quick bite and do my laundry for something clean to wear." This departure from the computer to everyday existence, I really enjoyed. Have a busy and rewarding week dear Mike.
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Date: 11/19/2024 8:04:00 AM
You are like a butterfly, hovering from one scene to another. Very interesting.
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Date: 11/18/2024 9:56:00 PM
Your style is so distinctive. I will always know it. Great poem setting November's mood.
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Date: 11/18/2024 6:38:00 PM
So many things happening at once. It's typical of November. It's an enjoyable poem. I can identify with it.
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