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Avenue

The chapter I'm writing starts with this setting a side street that goes for a block and ends at a ravine. Boxes are stacked in the hallway. The crimson trees outside are still, but I know something stirs. The laptop screen glows as I write. I'll close the cover soon but the story never ends. A veil of clouds hides the sky. I'll grab a quick bite and do my laundry for something clean to wear. A birthday card I meant to send lies on the floor. The friend wrote that he moved from his house to assisted living, his life shrinking from seven rooms to two. I cried when it rained last night for a woman I once loved. It is November and the weather is changing. I moved here three weeks ago and occupied the second floor to find my time and place.

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Date: 11/27/2024 7:39:00 PM
Many scenes and happenings are melded together in a harmonious way. Enjoyed this collage of experiences. "I'll grab a quick bite and do my laundry for something clean to wear." This departure from the computer to everyday existence, I really enjoyed. Have a busy and rewarding week dear Mike.
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Date: 11/19/2024 8:04:00 AM
You are like a butterfly, hovering from one scene to another. Very interesting.
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Date: 11/18/2024 9:56:00 PM
Your style is so distinctive. I will always know it. Great poem setting November's mood.
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Date: 11/18/2024 6:38:00 PM
So many things happening at once. It's typical of November. It's an enjoyable poem. I can identify with it.
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