Ava's Seagulls

Near water’s edge in evening, a young man
sits on a wooden bench, well-weathered, well worn,
his weary eyes amist.  He’ll one day plan
to bring his daughter here, his second born,
so she can watch the lake, see its foamy crests
tip-toeing toward her, tip-toeing back.
He can only imagine how impressed 
she’ll be, his little five year old crackerjack,
at seagulls swirling high up above her,
how hard she’ll laugh when their abandoned flight
ends with their heads submerged under water.
He can only imagine, driving home that night,
how much he’ll hope she won’t forget that day.
He clears his eyes.  Through mist the gulls fly away.

11/8/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/15/2018 7:13:00 PM
Love will always keep hope alive Phillip. Your love flows like a river making its way to form new paths. I love this special piece! : ) xxoo
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Date: 11/14/2018 11:51:00 AM
Very creative, expressive and emotive work. I enjoyed reading it. Yes, a five year old will enjoy a day like that with her father. Sara
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Date: 11/8/2018 2:28:00 PM
A fine sonnet indeed. A beautiful, evocative closing line.
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Date: 11/8/2018 1:06:00 PM
Wonderful write Phillip, sorry things never worked out for you, enjoy your time with your daughter while you can! Nice to see you posting you were missed!!
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 11/8/2018 1:28:00 PM
Thank you, John!
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