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Rondine
A Rondine has the following characteristics:
12-line poem, 2 stanzas, 7 lines in the first stanza; 5 lines in the second
with 8 or 10 syllables per line, except in the 7th and 12th lines, all 8 or all 10
7th and 12th lines are a refrain. The refrain comes from the opening word
or phrase of the poem Rhyme pattern looks like this:
(Ra)bbaabR/abbaR, with R part of line 1(a).

Fueling Autumn's color change each year are shorter days and cooler, longer nights, and a plucky October breeze that bites. Vermilion, crimson, and scarlet appear as emerald canopies disappear. And Jack Frost competes with the northern lights, fueling Autumn's color change. As though pulled by stings of a puppeteer leaves dance, one of nature's impressive sights, they take to the air on fanciful flights. And November shifts Fall into high gear, fueling Autumn's color change. (Rondine) 10/20/2022 Rousing Rondine Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jeff Kyser

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Date: 12/10/2022 5:52:00 PM
A beautiful poem cleverly crafted!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/11/2022 9:05:00 AM
Thanks, Karen, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/3/2022 12:13:00 AM
A good description of the changing autumn colours. Well done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/3/2022 8:06:00 AM
Thanks, Jeanette, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/25/2022 10:54:00 AM
"leaves dance, one of nature's impressive sights, they take to the air on fanciful flights..." I love these lines. Your poem is beautiful - so full of color. Congratulations
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/25/2022 11:47:00 AM
Thanks, Ann, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/22/2022 6:36:00 PM
Beautiful! Warmest congratulations on the top win, Emile. A fav
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/23/2022 7:13:00 AM
Thanks, Unseeking, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/22/2022 7:03:00 AM
Ah, my friend Emile. This is just delightful and filled with such imagery! Congratulations on your win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/22/2022 7:24:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/21/2022 6:54:00 PM
"plucky October breeze" - Beautiful.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/22/2022 7:23:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/21/2022 8:48:00 AM
A superb write. Congratulations, my friend, on your top spot in Emile's contest.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/21/2022 12:13:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, I believe you meant in "Jeff's" contest... As always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/21/2022 7:25:00 AM
A beauty! A winner! Congratulations! Especially loved: Jack Frost competes with the northern lights & pulled by stings of a puppeteer leaves dance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/21/2022 7:29:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/21/2022 6:35:00 AM
A wonderful poem Emile and it fits the form so well; congratulations on your win
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/21/2022 7:29:00 AM
Thanks, Terry, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/21/2022 4:44:00 AM
Congrats on your first placement - this was a lovely poem full of imagery and fit the rondine form very nicely!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/21/2022 7:28:00 AM
Thanks, Jeff, I appreciate the placement, my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/20/2022 8:08:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Emile. I like "As though pulled by stings of a puppeteer leaves dance.,"Many blessing my friend from all of Halloween.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/21/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thanks, Eve, I appreciate hearing from you and welcome your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/20/2022 3:30:00 PM
HellomEmile, I hope all is well with you. Yes Autumn is here. Last night it snowed. it also melted right away. It dark quickly to. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/21/2022 4:52:00 AM
Hello Emile and I appreciate your friendship to. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/20/2022 4:48:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene, I appreciate hearing from you my friend, have a great day, Emile.
Date: 10/20/2022 1:01:00 PM
What a great colorful example of this form, Emile!!! Also, thanks for my win with my swap quatrain. So glad you had us showcase that marvelous poetry form
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/20/2022 1:07:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, yes, I find it to be a marvelous poetry form as well, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/20/2022 12:42:00 PM
Emile, this is an astounding beautiful autumn poem deserving of being read widely. I love it. A FAVE.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/20/2022 1:08:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, your words are a ray of sunshine on this dreary day, my friend, Emile.

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