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I Form - Imagism Contest by Constance La France

                         September 22, 2024

"Autumn knows a mother's heart. It gives and then lets go."~ Angie Weiland-Crosby How proudly she stood, surmounting the tallest hill, a blazing maple tree whose limbs spread far and wide. In Summer, her green leaves swayed upon soft breezes, but Autumn painted them shades of crimson and rust. A burnished canopy, gilded by golden rays of the sun. Ruffled by an errant wind, each leaf danced like a flame before her limbs were barren, left in a state of malaise. The stinging of the season's first frost caused her to weep. Gnarled were her empty branches, as she stood weeping. She was bereft and grieving as if she'd lost her children. Maple held deep loathing for the changes of this season, when leaves withered and the world was gloomy brown. She endured Fall and Winter's snow by dreaming of Spring when again she would glow on the summit of the tallest hill. Pleased with her budding foliage and a newborn sapling, she'd be dressed in green finery, where songbirds would nest.

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Date: 10/1/2024 6:35:00 AM
Lin, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest, beautifully penned, I love the quote, but for some reason I cannot see the image, sure it was a beauty, Constance
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Date: 10/1/2024 6:43:00 AM
Thank you sincerely for the win, Constance. I'm not sure why some images disappear, but it is frustrating.
Date: 9/26/2024 11:00:00 PM
Such a beautiful picture of emotions weaved so skilfully, Lin. A delight to read, as we feel what the maple tree feels. Warmest congratulations on your top win
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Date: 10/1/2024 6:43:00 AM
Thank you very much, Seeker.
Date: 9/25/2024 10:20:00 AM
Dear Lin, this Imaginism poem is so beautiful, lovely picture too and a fitting quote… Beryl
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Date: 9/26/2024 8:02:00 AM
awww merci, my sweet friend. Thanks for liking both poem and picture....well quote, too!
Date: 9/24/2024 6:34:00 AM
Lin: Such a beautiful reflection and analogy to motherhood. I definitely believe the spirit of Nature is female. Autumn's power is in the promise of renewal. I love your poem on this. SuZ
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Date: 9/26/2024 8:01:00 AM
What kind and thoughtful comments, Suz... thanks so very much for enjoying my lines.
Date: 9/22/2024 11:36:00 PM
You bring the maple tree to life with your amazing write Lin. She stands majestic throughout the seasons and dresses according to them. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 9/26/2024 8:00:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. I'm so very appreciative of your supportive comments. Autumn does dress herself divinely.
Date: 9/22/2024 7:23:00 AM
A cascade of maple flavored images marvelously done with a dab of personification riding on the winds....
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Date: 9/22/2024 5:44:00 PM
I'm always appreciative of your comments, John. This one blows in with the sweetness of maple flavor. Seriously, thank you.

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