Autumn's Breath

I love to spend my October afternoons walking ankle-deep in dried, curled leaves.
They cover the back country roads, the forest floor, and my own front yard.
But, I cannot bear to rake them away, or burn them.
The dead, gnarled leaves drift down around me like confetti.

Some are in shades of red and maroon and crimson.
The color of country barns you pass by, when you are going home for Thanksgiving.
Or, those crisp apples, waiting to be picked from the orchard's trees.
And, taken, to be pressed for cider, or dipped into warm caramel.

Some are in shades of yellow and gold and butterscotch.
The color of dried corn husks and stalks, bundled together to decorate porches.
And, the fields full of bright sunflowers, guarded by straw scarecrows.
Or, like the buses and the #2 pencils, waiting for the children to come back to school.

Some are in shades of orange and amber and burnt sienna.
The color of pumpkins sitting in patches, waiting to be carved out for Halloween.
Or, like the sun setting on a cool, September, Indian summer's evening.
Or, a full harvest moon when it rises, late, into the night sky.

Some are in shades of brown and chocolate and pecan.
The color of fragrant cinnamon and nutmeg, sprinkled within my Mom's apple pie.
Or, like maple syrup dripping from my pancakes, on a November morning.
And, those acorns, fallen from oak trees, inhabited by squirrels and owls.

Autumn lasts for maybe, three months, but to me it feels like only three minutes.
So, I take it all in while I can.
I look up through the branches,
where the golden sunlight beats between the rustling leaves.
My heart beats with warmth and joy at the sight.
Even though, the wind chills me to the bone.

A long winter will soon arrive, and the world will be nothing but white and gray.
Yet, the rich, unforgettable beauty of fall lingers within me.
Because, sometimes, when the snow finally fades away in the spring, 
I can still smell those decaying, dead leaves.
Then, instantly, my mind returns to the autumn days that took my breath away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/3/2015 9:23:00 PM
Kelly, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/13/2015 7:33:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Skat. Its always appreciated! :)
Date: 11/1/2015 9:40:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem...I love your story :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/10/2015 7:01:00 PM
I am so glad you did, Edward... Thank you for your nice comments :)
Date: 3/18/2014 8:51:00 AM
Kelly What a beautifully written picture of autumn. Every line is full of imagery and description that tells a wonderful story of this colorful and serene time of year. Thanks for the great comment on my Lifes Bubble poem. Hugs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/18/2014 11:11:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comments, Robin! I appreciate it very much! :)
Date: 10/20/2013 10:52:00 PM
this was a very nice read...Thank You
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/21/2013 3:00:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comments, Keenan!
Date: 10/20/2013 6:12:00 PM
Just came in from admiring the magnificent colors in my yard and found this. You are a true autumn lover and wrote lovingly about it. Congratulations on your big well deserved win. Love, Joyce
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/20/2013 7:01:00 PM
Autumn is my favorite season! What's not to love?
Date: 10/19/2013 7:58:00 AM
Excellent poem and image! Thank you so much for sharing my dear friend Kelly! So love it and enjoyed. My big hearty congratulations on your great win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/17/2013 9:08:00 PM
glad you wrote on fall leaves..such a wonderful time of the year..congrats on your big win. BG
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Date: 10/16/2013 8:20:00 PM
Congrad's on your win, such a colorful write! Light & Love
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Date: 10/16/2013 4:01:00 PM
You have taken me to the autumn place as warm and as a cozy, as a late October day......just lovely!
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Date: 10/16/2013 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations Kelly...beautiful poem.
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Date: 10/16/2013 11:01:00 AM
and an awesome win it is.... love it Kelly...xox..Linda
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Date: 10/16/2013 10:11:00 AM
congrats on win and an exquiste write Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/15/2013 9:57:00 PM
beauty is all i see..... congrats...............SKAT
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Date: 9/14/2013 8:42:00 AM
Hi Kelly, congratulations In Gail's contest !!! Fresh & Beautiful... love the Autumn Air.... hugs *LINDA
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Date: 9/13/2013 6:00:00 AM
excellent poem Kelly congrats on win
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Date: 9/12/2013 6:22:00 PM
Congrats Kelly! I knew that yours would place better than mine. Its just so good.
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Date: 9/12/2013 8:28:00 AM
Kelly, deep and stunning... congrats ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/11/2013 1:08:00 PM
Congrats on your great winning work.Sara
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Date: 9/11/2013 11:40:00 AM
Kelly, This is just one reason I didn't enter this contest... You penned a most underrated poem. It is one of the best I have read. You are really using your talent and others are recognizing the skill you exercise in your writing. I'm tempted to say, "I knew Kelly when......." You are really making your mark.... Love ya.... Jake
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Date: 9/10/2013 6:09:00 PM
Autumn doesn't last long enough....beautiful poem and great win....
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Date: 9/10/2013 12:19:00 PM
- Autumn has come, it's a fact! - We get more time to sit inside and share beautiful poem! - Nice to join the contest with you, Kelly. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Wishing you a beautiful autumn. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/30/2013 1:29:00 PM
- Looking into your suggestion .... and it is beautiful, Kelly! - Wish you a nice weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/28/2013 9:14:00 PM
breathtaking view wish i was there
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/11/2013 8:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Date: 8/23/2013 4:48:00 PM
I believe this poem conforms to the contest rules way better than mine. There is always a fresh object of interest, a new sight or smell. Most definitely that cozy feeling of fall that my poem lacks. You are an amazing poet! Wonderful comparison of colours as well. I must say that I admire how well you took my criticism; not everyone can do that. I hope that you will continue to enter my contests, and that your placing will be much better in the future.
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Date: 8/14/2013 4:02:00 AM
Very descriptive of the season..Enjoyed walking through Autumn with you..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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