Autumn Side Of September Premiere Contest Winner

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December 19, 2024

~ First Place ~
Premiere Contest: Premiere VIII - Open
Sponsor: Rob Carmack

~ Poem Of The Day ~
December 20, 2024

~ Fifth Place ~
Premiere Contest: Happy Birthday
Sponsor: Regina McIntosh


 

In the middle ages
these roughed and scuffed decades
between newborn crocus -snow-melt-nursed- and
dried hydrangea blooms sepia-skinned and papery thin
I earned the right to wear sapphires
and burn mademoiselle mistakes with wisdom-fires

I collected years for years to earn my autumn season
—the autumn side of September
hair once a cascade of Sol’s solar flare
now but faded silver streams spilled by Harvest moon
though hazel eyes still reveal kaleidoscope enchantment
...no longer the garish-girlish shade of June grass
but rather  a muted-Nature-diluted  sage green; 
specked with autumn sunset amber
flecked with maple bark brown
—tints of hazel colors hint at my September birth

September ma chérie  when you whisper low
I hear cumulus collide cotton-ball-soft
your wind-song croons my name
as yellow willows bend over the river bank
like queens about to wash their troubles from tresses 

prayers of praise I float abundant as corn-fruit-maize
away they fly un-weighed    indeed 
prayers of praise do rise to rosé skies as light as sunlit swans

shadows lengthen as Sol too old for August swagger
sags upon indigo hills
September brings me closer to the western edge
where my elder-berry soul will someday fledge
life no longer runs on the reach for noon-time-highs—
slouchy-sun-afternoons fade to early sunset swoons
a time of ending   a time of beginning
diurnal dust both gold and coal  weighed and balanced;
equinox an unwinding clock from day to dark
as sapphire-fire melts tart Virgo to free buttery Libra 
—revolution gives way to evolution

ah September so sincere  as we harvest memories 
I appreciate being in the moment;
summer-sizz-fizz ...hard-body-energy uncorked
exuberant like shaken champagne spray
gives way now to soft-bellied leaf-falling days musing
with mulled apple cider spiced with nutmeg rum—
savoring reflections in facets of sapphire nights
as fire pit phoenixes fly ember-seeds of dreams
into spiral galaxies where Pegasus reigns…
my imagination— rein free— rains in watercolors
across paper reams of fated nights brisk-with-a-nip 
playful-painful like puppies’ milk-teeth
that nicks against tanned skin not yet sweater ready
but a wool embrace allowed for winter lies ahead

in wood-stove-season of September 
sapphire spirit burns with fire in my throat
I sing without fear  
my tears   my cheers   alive in my verse
memoirs of Venus and Mars shared with the universe
September  are you listening?
together we'll ripen like pale wheat sheafs
celebrate and commiserate as we equate
my second coming of age 
to your muted season of silver and sage

I collected years for years to earn my autumn season
—the autumn side of September
born of your change-of-life-womb  
I return your vintage sister
together we’ll lose the mettle of our rusted metal 
to spindle pricks of hoarfrost
but never lose the star in our sapphire stone
your copper canopy will fall  
my copper veins will freeze
when winter man grows his ancient ice-beard long
his reason as old as his rime is cold
as he paints us faint in December’s antique white

 —but my blood and bosom 
will always hold your apple cider spiced and fire pit glow

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Date: 8/25/2025 12:04:00 PM
My Dearest Rhyme Time I knew I was in for a poetic jewel the minute I read your amazing title that perfectly sums up your magnificent poem overflowing with a harvest of mesmerizing images, words rich in meaning with playful double meanings "mettle," "metal." Congratulations on your trophy win! So beautifully written. This is a treasure chest and a fav for me. Sending you blessings on glittering sapphires sweet poetry sis!
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Date: 9/7/2025 10:44:00 AM
My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, from reading and savoring your amazing poetry, I knew you would relish the natural, appreciative autumn imageries in this poem. Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts with me. We both appreciation the harvest season so much. We are inspired by Fall in such a deeply intimate way and we share that inspiration in our poems the way poetry sister do. I'm gratified by your heartwarming congrats and in gratitude for your fav, my sweet Sam. As always, your words touch my heart. Warmest wishes sent to you on the flight of fire pit embers.. ~Susan
Date: 8/23/2025 12:31:00 PM
Hi Susan, I have been engrossed in your stunning magnum opus metaphor rich piece and its lyrical and literary endowments. I have been transfixed by each line and each golden word on your treasure trove lines. Your sensitive treatment of both time and seasons interspersed with personal evolution is uniquely intelligent. Congratulations on your pinnacle placement. Thank you sincerely for your generous comments on my contest entry, especially from someone of your stature. Warm wishes, Howard
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Date: 8/24/2025 8:02:00 AM
Dear Howard, I am elated, but then beyond that, I am both honored and humbled by your thoughtful, soulful and generous critique of my poem. Your thoughts mean so much to me as I enjoy and admire the high caliber of your amazing poetry. Thank you for your wonderful visit and for sharing in the autumn side of September with me. Your heartwarming congrats are the cherry on top! Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 8/22/2025 12:21:00 PM
Amazing. I felt like I was reading my soul song in my menopausal autumn days. Your words have colored and painted this page into a true work of art, heart. Absolutely beautiful and worthy. Xoxo
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Date: 8/24/2025 7:55:00 AM
Dear Crystol, I'm honored to receive your beautiful and uplifting comments. Thank you for your gracious visit and for sharing in the autumn side of September with me. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 8/22/2025 11:27:00 AM
Susan, Dear poet, Dear friend, you have shared the passage of time with the changing seasons. Autumn or September is a time of reflection, whether wrapped in the colors so vibrant or wrapped in the thoughts of life lived. Both merge where the trail meets in quiet contemplation and beauty. This is a beautiful poem that exposes your beautiful soul, dear friend, dear poet...congratulations...Frederic
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Date: 8/24/2025 7:54:00 AM
Frederic, dear friend, dear poet, I am ever so grateful for the deep well that is your reflective soul that expresses itself so gently, elegantly and eloquently. Thank you for sharing in the aging season of September with me. Your beautiful insights are soulful, thoughtful and treasured. Your heartwarming congrats are the cherry on top! Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan
Date: 8/22/2025 11:04:00 AM
Dear Susan, your poem is a profoundly evocative contemplation on the passage of time, changing seasons, and personal growth; a fantastic trip filled with incredible imagery created by your magical words. It's terrific, with lovely pictures and strong phrase combinations; a lot of effort and thought must have gone into it - congrats on the throphy win!
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Date: 8/23/2025 6:48:00 AM
Dear Lasaad, soulful poet, it's wonderful to see you! Thank you for sharing in the season of September with me and for your heartwarming words. Your kind congrats are received with joy. I'm so glad to know you enjoyed my poem. Your poetic presence here is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 8/22/2025 10:54:00 AM
Beautiful and elegant. All I can say is 'damn' and congrats.
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Date: 8/22/2025 6:45:00 PM
Dear Rob, I’m thrilled by your ‘damn’ and by your kind congrats. Your wonderful response is truly appreciated. Thank you for the honor of my poem’s placement in your esteemed contest. I’m gratified to be among the talented poets on your list. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/20/2025 6:48:00 AM
Going over some fave poems today. What a master poet you are! This poetic look at aging and eventuality is expertly written. So engaging
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Date: 2/21/2025 8:04:00 AM
Dear Tom, I relish your return visit to this poem. I'm so honored to know that this is one of your faves and I am truly humbled by your esteemed thoughts. A master poet -no, still learning (struggling with at times.. lol!) the tricks of the trade but your encouragement and faith in my poetry lifts my spirits to beyond the clouds. Thank you my dear poet friend, you are appreciated :) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 1/19/2025 9:09:00 PM
When you think of September what flurry of images pass through your mind. From youthful reckless energy and burning colors, you have grown into rusty autumn's fading shades. But your journey is crowned with 'wisdom fires' and dreams. "as fire-flight-phoenixes fly ember-seeds of dreams into spiral galaxies where Pegasus reigns my imagination— rein free— rains in watercolors" . Indeed your imagination and dreams fly into galaxies where Pegasus reigns. As long as your gifted muse is by your side, you needn't lament the loss of your youthful energy and glossy appearance ."I sing without fear my tears my cheers alive in my verse". Dear Susan, you keep singing and let us dip in the ocean of your imagination and swim over the swelling tides of your poesy. I wonder How I missed this superb poem. Hearty and belated Congratulations on your POTD
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Date: 1/23/2025 5:19:00 PM
Dearest Valsa, soulful poetess, thank you for joining with me in this poetic journey through September. Your precious thoughts so beautifully reflect your response to my poem. I'm humbled and honored by your wondrous words and they warm my heart so completely. My appreciation for your amazing thoughts and friendship is deeply held. Thank you, my dear friend, for your gracious visit and for your kind congrats. Your poetic spirit is as generous as it is artistic. Your poetry soars and so does my appreciation for you. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 1/5/2025 7:26:00 PM
Wow. I imagine this must be way up there on the winner list. It's absolutely gorgeous. Congrats. I am honored to be on the list with you.
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Date: 1/6/2025 10:46:00 AM
Dear Andrea, it's so rewarding to receive glowing comments from a poet I hold in such high regard. Thank you for your inspiring words of congrats. It's an honor to share the podium with you too. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 1/5/2025 3:54:00 PM
another inspired write from you, some beautiful images and striking word combos; a lot of work and thought must've gone into it - congrats on your win in the contest! :)
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Date: 1/6/2025 10:43:00 AM
Dear Charlotte, it's gratifying to receive such uplifting words from a poet whose golden gift for verse I hold in highest esteem. Thank you for sharing your time with me in September and for your kind congrats. Indeed, lots of work and thought then.. edit, re-edit.. more work and thought.. edit, re-edit.. more work and thought ..lol.. and so it goes and grows till I feel it's time to let it go... I have a feeling that we work and build our poetry in the same way, from the inside out. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 1/5/2025 1:23:00 PM
Susan, a huge CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive poem! Janice
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Date: 1/6/2025 10:24:00 AM
Dear Janice, thank you for your gracious visit and kind congrats. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 1/5/2025 4:12:00 AM
Amazing writing. Congrats on this top win and much love and blessings, prayers too, Gina
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Date: 1/5/2025 8:26:00 AM
Dearest Gina, thank you for your beautiful thoughts and kind congrats. I'm honored by my poem's placement in your esteemed contest and thrilled to share to podium with the gifted poets listed. Congrats to all! Your contest sponsorship is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes to you, my poet friend, for a wonderful 2025.. ~Susan
Date: 1/3/2025 8:18:00 AM
Oh Susan what a wonderful journey with such amazing imagery you have created with your magical words. Beautiful and more beautiful Ha! Congratulations my friend on POTD….DEBX
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Date: 1/3/2025 8:23:00 AM
Dear Deb, I'm thrilled by your response to my poem! Thank you for sharing in the journey of September with me. Your precious thoughts and kind congrats are treasured. Warmest wishes to you, my sweet poet friend, for a wonderful 2025.. ~Susan
Date: 12/27/2024 7:12:00 AM
Congrats Susan for your pick as Best Poems. Poignant verse.
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:21:00 AM
Dear Greg, thank you for your gracious visit and wonderful words. Your poetic presence is uplifting. Warmest wishes for a happy and healthy 2025 my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 12/22/2024 5:29:00 PM
What a poem! It's so full of deep metaphors that I don't know where to begin...how to pick favs. I respect poets that have reached your stage in life...all that wisdom to draw from, experiences...beautiful work, a real pleasure to read it <3
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:45:00 AM
Dear Paige, soulful poet, it's wonderful to see you! Thank you for sharing in September with me and for your heartwarming words. I'm so glad to know you enjoyed my poem. Your shining presence here is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes for a happy new year my poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 12/22/2024 3:45:00 AM
Hello my friend, your poem is a beautifully evocative meditation on the passage of time, the changing seasons, and personal growth. It reflects on your transformation over time, comparing yourself to the shift from summer to autumn, with a deep focus on the nuances of September as a time of both endings and beginnings. The poem is rich in sensory imagery and metaphor, linking the natural world to the inner journey.
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:43:00 AM
Happy new year, my inspiring friend! Thank you for taking the journey into September with me. Your beautiful comments are valued, Silent One. September is much like a sapphire with many shining facets. Warmest wishes to you and yours for a wonderful new year filled with light, love, laughter, and of course, poetic inspiration.. ~Susan
Date: 12/21/2024 1:52:00 AM
Susan congratulations on receiving this High Honor. I am late to the party, did not even know. Your Poetry Susan is on another level. As always you create unique metaphors and tell a story that captures the readers attention to the fine details. Congratulations on receiving Potd. Well deserved.
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:39:00 AM
Dear Michael, I revel in your wonderful words. Indeed, I am honored both by your gracious visit and lovely thoughts. Thank you for sharing in September with me and for your kind congrats. Your poetry friendship is valued. Warmest wishes for a happy, healthy and inspired new year.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 9:00:00 PM
Congratulations Susan on receiving the honour of poem of the day, I enjoyed this fascinating read… Beryl
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:26:00 AM
Dear Beryl, thank you sharing in September with me. Thank you for your wonderful visit. Your heartwarming words and kind congrats are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes, my poet friend, for a happy and healthy 2025.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Your poem took me on a fantasy journey through autumn's bounty.
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:23:00 AM
Dear Hilda, I'm so glad you journeyed through September with me. Thank you for your wonderful visit and heartwarming words. Your congrats are truly appreciated as is your poetic friendship. Warmest wishes for a happy and healthy 2025.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 6:14:00 PM
' both gold and coal weighed and balanced. ' Dearest Susan, on this side of September, every smile line or sparkle in the hair has been earned; and gracefully so. Your words shine, my sweet friend. You certainly have a way of expressing life, those moments within and the delicate changing of seasons. I'm in complete awe. Congratulations my beautiful friend, on Poem of the Day. Warm hugs with many blessings, :) Brandy
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:32:00 AM
Dearest Brandy, my lovely and expressive poetess friend, seeing you grace my poem's page is truly heartwarming. Thank you for your gracious spirit and beautiful comments. I am honored, my dear friend. Your words fall upon my poem and my heart like stardust.. so enchanting is your presence. You leave me in awe. In appreciation for sweet you and your kind congrats. Warmest wishes for a happy, healthy and inspired new year.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 6:07:00 PM
That was a fun read. Thanks for sharing! And congrats on your POTD!
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Date: 12/30/2024 8:17:00 AM
Dear Benjamin, thank you for your gracious visit and lovely comments. I'm glad to know you enjoyed my poem. Your heartwarming congrats are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 4:38:00 PM
Heartfelt Congratulations, Dear Susan, on this POTD. Your poem is undoubtedly a masterpiece which I feel about all your poems - I am in awe with your unique theme, the stunning images, rich vocabulary! I have to read every line quite a few times to truly enjoy the beauty and subtleness of your poetic language. Dear Susan, Wow! I am amazed!
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Date: 12/30/2024 8:16:00 AM
Dearest, Mala, it's so wonderful to see you! I'm overwhelmed by your beautiful response to my poem. The honor of your words move me deeply as I hold you and your amazing poetry in such high esteem. I humbly express my deepest appreciation for your thoughts and friendship. Thank you for your uplifting and inspiring kindness. Your heartfelt congrats are truly cherished. Warmest wishes for a wonderful new year, lovely poetess and sweet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 11:27:00 AM
Dear Susan, Your beautiful poem is a masterpiece of the changing seasons of our lives, always knowing that Winter awaits. It's not an easy time, but made lovely by your thoughts. I love it.
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Date: 12/23/2024 11:26:00 AM
Dear Ann, soulful poetess, thank you for your gracious visit. Your comments touch me deeply and are received with my truest appreciation. The autumn season of life can be bittersweet knowing that winter waits in the wings.. but lucky are we that taste the snowflakes that fall on our weary tongues once again. Warmest wishes to you and yours for a merry Christmas.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 10:45:00 AM
This was a great read Susan, I Enjoyed it. Congratulations on your POTD win. Wishing you fabulous weekend and Happy Christmas.
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Date: 12/23/2024 11:21:00 AM
Dear Zyrool, thank you for your gracious visit and kind congrats. Your beautiful comments are received with gratitude. Warmest wishes to you and yours for a merry Christmas.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a lovely write. Oh yes, "the autumn side of September" between the hot summer/the cold winter. Age/time will pass away but September will be back each year. Have a wonderful day with your win. Merry Christmas with Blessings..................
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Date: 12/23/2024 11:13:00 AM
Dear Paula, your touching comment is filled with both beauty and wisdom. Thank you for your gracious visit and kind congrats. Your shining presence is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes for a merry Christmas, my sweet friend.. ~Susan
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