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December 19, 2024

~ Poem Of The Day ~
December 20, 2024

~ Fifth Place ~
Premiere Contest: Happy Birthday
Sponsor: Regina McIntosh


 

In the middle ages these roughed and scuffed decades between newborn crocus snow-melt-nursed and dried hydrangea blooms sepia-skinned and papery thin I earned the right to wear sapphires and burn my mademoiselle mistakes with wisdom-fires it took me a while to grow into my autumn season —the autumn side of September hair once a cascade of summer’s solar flare now but faded flaxen streams spilled by Harvest moon though hazel eyes reveal kaleidoscope enchantment — no more the garish girlish shade of summer grass but rather a muted Nature diluted sage-green specked with autumn sunset amber flecked with maple bark brown; tints of color hint at my September birth September ma chérie when you whisper low I hear cumulus collide cotton-soft your wind-song croons my name as yellow willows bend over the bank like queens about to wash their troubles from tresses prayers of praise I float abundant as corn-fruit-maize away they fly un-weighed to skies rosé like sunlit swans shadows lengthen as sun without swagger sags upon indigo hills September brings me closer to the western edge where my elder-berry soul will someday fledge life no longer noon-time-high a time of ending a time of beginning diurnal dust both gold and coal weighed and balanced equinox an unwinding clock as sapphire-fire melts tart Virgo to free buttery Libra revolution gives way to evolution ah September so sincere as we harvest memories I realize things I don’t miss summer energy uncorked like shaken champagne spray now gives way to days oak-aged like Chardonnay I savor reflections in facets of sapphire nights as fire-flight-phoenixes fly ember-seeds of dreams into spiral galaxies where Pegasus reigns my imagination— rein free— rains in watercolors across paper reams of fated nights brisk with a nip playful-painful like puppies’ milk-teeth that nick against my skin not yet sweater ready but I allow a woolen embrace for winter lay ahead in the wood-stove-season of September sapphire spirit burns with a fire in my throat I sing without fear my tears my cheers alive in my verse memoirs of Venus and Mars shared with the universe September are you listening? together we will ripen like pale wheat sheafs as we celebrate and commiserate my second coming of age and your muted season of silver and sage it took me a while to grow into my autumn season —the autumn side of September born of your change-of-life-womb I return your vintage sister together we’ll lose the mettle of our rusted metal to the spindle pricks of hoarfrost but never the star of our sapphire stone your copper canopy will fall my copper veins will freeze when winter man grows his ancient ice-beard long his reason as old as his rime is cold as he paints us faint in December’s antique white —but my blood and bosom will always hold your apple cider spice and fire pit glow

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Date: 2/20/2025 6:48:00 AM
Going over some fave poems today. What a master poet you are! This poetic look at aging and eventuality is expertly written. So engaging
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Date: 2/21/2025 8:04:00 AM
Dear Tom, I relish your return visit to this poem. I'm so honored to know that this is one of your faves and I am truly humbled by your esteemed thoughts. A master poet -no, still learning (struggling with at times.. lol!) the tricks of the trade but your encouragement and faith in my poetry lifts my spirits to beyond the clouds. Thank you my dear poet friend, you are appreciated :) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 1/19/2025 9:09:00 PM
When you think of September what flurry of images pass through your mind. From youthful reckless energy and burning colors, you have grown into rusty autumn's fading shades. But your journey is crowned with 'wisdom fires' and dreams. "as fire-flight-phoenixes fly ember-seeds of dreams into spiral galaxies where Pegasus reigns my imagination— rein free— rains in watercolors" . Indeed your imagination and dreams fly into galaxies where Pegasus reigns. As long as your gifted muse is by your side, you needn't lament the loss of your youthful energy and glossy appearance ."I sing without fear my tears my cheers alive in my verse". Dear Susan, you keep singing and let us dip in the ocean of your imagination and swim over the swelling tides of your poesy. I wonder How I missed this superb poem. Hearty and belated Congratulations on your POTD
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Date: 1/23/2025 5:19:00 PM
Dearest Valsa, soulful poetess, thank you for joining with me in this poetic journey through September. Your precious thoughts so beautifully reflect your response to my poem. I'm humbled and honored by your wondrous words and they warm my heart so completely. My appreciation for your amazing thoughts and friendship is deeply held. Thank you, my dear friend, for your gracious visit and for your kind congrats. Your poetic spirit is as generous as it is artistic. Your poetry soars and so does my appreciation for you. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 1/5/2025 7:26:00 PM
Wow. I imagine this must be way up there on the winner list. It's absolutely gorgeous. Congrats. I am honored to be on the list with you.
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Date: 1/6/2025 10:46:00 AM
Dear Andrea, it's so rewarding to receive glowing comments from a poet I hold in such high regard. Thank you for your inspiring words of congrats. It's an honor to share the podium with you too. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 1/5/2025 3:54:00 PM
another inspired write from you, some beautiful images and striking word combos; a lot of work and thought must've gone into it - congrats on your win in the contest! :)
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Date: 1/6/2025 10:43:00 AM
Dear Charlotte, it's gratifying to receive such uplifting words from a poet whose golden gift for verse I hold in highest esteem. Thank you for sharing your time with me in September and for your kind congrats. Indeed, lots of work and thought then.. edit, re-edit.. more work and thought.. edit, re-edit.. more work and thought ..lol.. and so it goes and grows till I feel it's time to let it go... I have a feeling that we work and build our poetry in the same way, from the inside out. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 1/5/2025 1:23:00 PM
Susan, a huge CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive poem! Janice
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Date: 1/6/2025 10:24:00 AM
Dear Janice, thank you for your gracious visit and kind congrats. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 1/5/2025 4:12:00 AM
Amazing writing. Congrats on this top win and much love and blessings, prayers too, Gina
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Date: 1/5/2025 8:26:00 AM
Dearest Gina, thank you for your beautiful thoughts and kind congrats. I'm honored by my poem's placement in your esteemed contest and thrilled to share to podium with the gifted poets listed. Congrats to all! Your contest sponsorship is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes to you, my poet friend, for a wonderful 2025.. ~Susan
Date: 1/3/2025 8:18:00 AM
Oh Susan what a wonderful journey with such amazing imagery you have created with your magical words. Beautiful and more beautiful Ha! Congratulations my friend on POTD….DEBX
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Date: 1/3/2025 8:23:00 AM
Dear Deb, I'm thrilled by your response to my poem! Thank you for sharing in the journey of September with me. Your precious thoughts and kind congrats are treasured. Warmest wishes to you, my sweet poet friend, for a wonderful 2025.. ~Susan
Date: 12/27/2024 7:12:00 AM
Congrats Susan for your pick as Best Poems. Poignant verse.
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:21:00 AM
Dear Greg, thank you for your gracious visit and wonderful words. Your poetic presence is uplifting. Warmest wishes for a happy and healthy 2025 my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 12/22/2024 5:29:00 PM
What a poem! It's so full of deep metaphors that I don't know where to begin...how to pick favs. I respect poets that have reached your stage in life...all that wisdom to draw from, experiences...beautiful work, a real pleasure to read it <3
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:45:00 AM
Dear Paige, soulful poet, it's wonderful to see you! Thank you for sharing in September with me and for your heartwarming words. I'm so glad to know you enjoyed my poem. Your shining presence here is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes for a happy new year my poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 12/22/2024 3:45:00 AM
Hello my friend, your poem is a beautifully evocative meditation on the passage of time, the changing seasons, and personal growth. It reflects on your transformation over time, comparing yourself to the shift from summer to autumn, with a deep focus on the nuances of September as a time of both endings and beginnings. The poem is rich in sensory imagery and metaphor, linking the natural world to the inner journey.
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:43:00 AM
Happy new year, my inspiring friend! Thank you for taking the journey into September with me. Your beautiful comments are valued, Silent One. September is much like a sapphire with many shining facets. Warmest wishes to you and yours for a wonderful new year filled with light, love, laughter, and of course, poetic inspiration.. ~Susan
Date: 12/21/2024 1:52:00 AM
Susan congratulations on receiving this High Honor. I am late to the party, did not even know. Your Poetry Susan is on another level. As always you create unique metaphors and tell a story that captures the readers attention to the fine details. Congratulations on receiving Potd. Well deserved.
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:39:00 AM
Dear Michael, I revel in your wonderful words. Indeed, I am honored both by your gracious visit and lovely thoughts. Thank you for sharing in September with me and for your kind congrats. Your poetry friendship is valued. Warmest wishes for a happy, healthy and inspired new year.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 9:00:00 PM
Congratulations Susan on receiving the honour of poem of the day, I enjoyed this fascinating read… Beryl
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:26:00 AM
Dear Beryl, thank you sharing in September with me. Thank you for your wonderful visit. Your heartwarming words and kind congrats are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes, my poet friend, for a happy and healthy 2025.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Your poem took me on a fantasy journey through autumn's bounty.
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:23:00 AM
Dear Hilda, I'm so glad you journeyed through September with me. Thank you for your wonderful visit and heartwarming words. Your congrats are truly appreciated as is your poetic friendship. Warmest wishes for a happy and healthy 2025.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 6:14:00 PM
' both gold and coal weighed and balanced. ' Dearest Susan, on this side of September, every smile line or sparkle in the hair has been earned; and gracefully so. Your words shine, my sweet friend. You certainly have a way of expressing life, those moments within and the delicate changing of seasons. I'm in complete awe. Congratulations my beautiful friend, on Poem of the Day. Warm hugs with many blessings, :) Brandy
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:32:00 AM
Dearest Brandy, my lovely and expressive poetess friend, seeing you grace my poem's page is truly heartwarming. Thank you for your gracious spirit and beautiful comments. I am honored, my dear friend. Your words fall upon my poem and my heart like stardust.. so enchanting is your presence. You leave me in awe. In appreciation for sweet you and your kind congrats. Warmest wishes for a happy, healthy and inspired new year.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 6:07:00 PM
That was a fun read. Thanks for sharing! And congrats on your POTD!
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Date: 12/30/2024 8:17:00 AM
Dear Benjamin, thank you for your gracious visit and lovely comments. I'm glad to know you enjoyed my poem. Your heartwarming congrats are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 4:38:00 PM
Heartfelt Congratulations, Dear Susan, on this POTD. Your poem is undoubtedly a masterpiece which I feel about all your poems - I am in awe with your unique theme, the stunning images, rich vocabulary! I have to read every line quite a few times to truly enjoy the beauty and subtleness of your poetic language. Dear Susan, Wow! I am amazed!
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Date: 12/30/2024 8:16:00 AM
Dearest, Mala, it's so wonderful to see you! I'm overwhelmed by your beautiful response to my poem. The honor of your words move me deeply as I hold you and your amazing poetry in such high esteem. I humbly express my deepest appreciation for your thoughts and friendship. Thank you for your uplifting and inspiring kindness. Your heartfelt congrats are truly cherished. Warmest wishes for a wonderful new year, lovely poetess and sweet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 11:27:00 AM
Dear Susan, Your beautiful poem is a masterpiece of the changing seasons of our lives, always knowing that Winter awaits. It's not an easy time, but made lovely by your thoughts. I love it.
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Date: 12/23/2024 11:26:00 AM
Dear Ann, soulful poetess, thank you for your gracious visit. Your comments touch me deeply and are received with my truest appreciation. The autumn season of life can be bittersweet knowing that winter waits in the wings.. but lucky are we that taste the snowflakes that fall on our weary tongues once again. Warmest wishes to you and yours for a merry Christmas.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 10:45:00 AM
This was a great read Susan, I Enjoyed it. Congratulations on your POTD win. Wishing you fabulous weekend and Happy Christmas.
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Date: 12/23/2024 11:21:00 AM
Dear Zyrool, thank you for your gracious visit and kind congrats. Your beautiful comments are received with gratitude. Warmest wishes to you and yours for a merry Christmas.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a lovely write. Oh yes, "the autumn side of September" between the hot summer/the cold winter. Age/time will pass away but September will be back each year. Have a wonderful day with your win. Merry Christmas with Blessings..................
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Date: 12/23/2024 11:13:00 AM
Dear Paula, your touching comment is filled with both beauty and wisdom. Thank you for your gracious visit and kind congrats. Your shining presence is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes for a merry Christmas, my sweet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 8:53:00 AM
It's readily apparent each layer of your poetry is filled with subtle sensitivity, so touching, poetess. Only better days ahead, dearest. A cute little ditty from "GiGi" "The fountain of youth is as dull as paint Methuselah is my patron saint" Sending my all to shake your hand and congratulate you on your POTD! Happy to know you Susan Ashley, my friend. Virtual hugs!! ~xAnaya
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Date: 12/23/2024 11:09:00 AM
Dearest Anaya, precious friend and poet, yes, yes, your ditty from "GiGi" could not have said it any more perfectly! I adore Miss Lena Horne's rendition from 1979, so full of truth and sass! And I'm down with every word! :) Thank you for your amazing comments and heartwarming congrats. So glad you spent time with me in September. Happy to know YOU, I Am Anaya, my dear sweet friend. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 7:58:00 AM
Dear Susan, I just had to reach out and tell you how much your poem moved me. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD! Your words swept me into a world where time feels rich and layered from every shade of life. Merry Christmas, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 12/23/2024 10:35:00 AM
Dear Daniel, thank you for reaching out to me with your wonderful response to my poem. It's so rewarding to know that my poem moved you. The beauty of your comments move me too. I truly appreciate your shining poetic presence, my inspiring friend. Warmest wishes to you and yours for a very merry Christmas.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 7:10:00 AM
This is so lovely, dear Susan! Love all the imagery and heartfelt write. Love the end too. A fave!!
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Date: 12/23/2024 10:30:00 AM
Dear Kim, I'm thrilled by your wonderful response to my poem. So happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for your gracious visit and for the high honor of your fave. Warmest wishes to you and yours for a merry Christmas and a happy new year.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 7:06:00 AM
Susan, your poetic expressions always have more depth of meaning than most realize, and it doesn't take a shovel to excavate them. Congratulations on your September sapphires shining brilliantly as POTD.
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Date: 12/23/2024 10:26:00 AM
Dear Lin, thank you for your heartwarming comments and for your kind congrats. There's always more to an iceberg beneath the surface, than above it. I appreciate you looking more deeply to read between and below the lines of the poetic page. Your shining presence is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes for a merry Christmas and a happy, healthy and inspired new year.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 5:32:00 AM
'Holding on to the reins of September as Pegasus guides you through spiral galaxies', Wonderful write Susan, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 12/21/2024 7:31:00 AM
Dear Joseph, it's wonderful to see you! Thank you for sharing in September with me and for your heartwarming congrats. I'm glad to know you enjoyed my poem. Your esteemed presence here is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 12/20/2024 3:34:00 AM
Oh gosh, dearest poetess of brilliance how breathtakingly beauteous is this well deserved POTD. A resounding Congratulations, enjoy immensely your special poetry day. A bright and festive Christmas and New Year to you good friend and your family. All the best!
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Date: 12/21/2024 7:30:00 AM
Dearest Regina, soulful poetess, thank you for your gracious visit and for spending time in the autumn side of September with me. Your precious thoughts and kind congrats fill me with gratitude for your shining friendship. Warmest wishes to you and yours, my poet friend, for a merry Christmas and a happy, healthy and inspired new year.. ~Susan
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