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It's fall and trees are turning brown, they beat small and swirl in the air, wavy, curly, crimson, blonde, bare. Life's gold ring slightly free to drown, around a bright world went dull gray, in hope of having one more day. She hears the song of a glazed crown, as remembered echoes unfold, the real story that isn't told. leaves were blown on the entire ground, I smiled and felt so blight alone, Earth and sky fused by flesh and bone.  I expect all these shades could sound, maybe stretch fall by a little, I groove how it looks and whittles. It's fall and trees are turning brown, Life's gold ring slightly free to drown, She hears the song of a glazed crown, leaves were blown on the entire ground, I hope all of these hues could sound.
Written: September 17, 2022 In Remembrance of Connie Autumn Theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Suzanne Delaney

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Date: 10/22/2022 5:50:00 AM
"Earth and sky fused by flesh and bone" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/21/2022 9:08:00 PM
A beautiful poem written in Connie's poetic form about the colorful autumn. Lovely penning. Congratulations on your first place win, dear Lasaad...
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Date: 10/21/2022 1:12:00 PM
Thankyou Lasaad……for taking part in this tribute to Connie with your fine Autumn Constanza…These lines rang true….’around a bright world went dull gray, in hope of having one more day.’ If only we could have kept her here. Blessings,SuZ
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Date: 10/21/2022 1:25:00 PM
Dear Suzanne, thank you so much for sponsoring the tribute to Connie RIP. Appreciate your placement and your comment on my poem. Blessings
Date: 9/22/2022 10:11:00 PM
Marvelous autumn imagery, Lasaad, and a wonderful tribute to Connie, her Constanza form, and her favorite season. Enjoyed the read today. Blessings ~ John
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Date: 9/19/2022 6:36:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to our dear Connie, Very nicely penned Sotto
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Date: 9/18/2022 10:30:00 AM
A composition of beauty, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Marvelous imagery! Be blessed!
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Date: 9/18/2022 9:15:00 AM
A well penned poem in honor of Connie, in Connie's creative form. Thanks for sharing you thoughts for this contest, Lasaad. Your poem should do well. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 9/18/2022 9:08:00 AM
Yes, autumn is a beautiful time of year in competition to Spring where the dogwoods and apple trees are full of blossoms. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/18/2022 8:46:00 AM
Very nice. I hope Connie is looking down and reading all these!!
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Date: 9/18/2022 8:23:00 AM
Wonderfully written Lasaad in Connies memory. Congratulations for a well penned Poem...
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Date: 9/18/2022 7:07:00 AM
Delightful and colorful as autumn. Much enjoyed the beauty of the season you convey in ornate words and this special poem in honor of Connie. Well done my friend. Best to you.
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Date: 9/18/2022 1:44:00 AM
Dear Connie, we will never forget you and appreciate your famous verses.
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Date: 9/18/2022 6:23:00 AM
Thanks for your Nice words, Victor, RIP Connie. And have a blessed weekend.
Date: 9/17/2022 11:51:00 PM
Connie would have loved this one Lasaad, I do love the season of autumn with its amazing colours. Hope your weekend is going.. Tom
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Date: 9/18/2022 6:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom. Appreciate your kind words. RIP Connie . Have a great weekend

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