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Aunt Hazel

As you lay waiting for God to take your hand my Father is by your bed in prayer as he had planned You are the first of his siblings to see pass as he ask God to lead you to the promise land You seem to be sleeping peaceful until your eyes open with a twinkle looking up at your brother you smile with eyes like crystals In a soft whisper you speak seeming like all time has stopped without a single tear that doesn't drop "I love you my brother do not feel greed in wanting me to stay for this is the end of my long life's play" The curtain has closed the lights have dimmed with one short breath she is heaven sent forever more with no end. *For my sweet aunt forever in out hearts who has passed* T Reams 4/27/15

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Date: 6/19/2015 2:39:00 AM
A very moving poem on the transition of this life to the next written in beautiful sentiments and wordings wow. The rhyming eulogy n elegy reads like a great dirge like poem. Kudos.
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Date: 6/1/2015 6:21:00 PM
Oh my, Tammy. I didn't expect such a tender and emotional moment, until I read your poem. It is beautifully written, and I am so touched, these parting words couldn't have been more poignant.
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Date: 6/1/2015 10:20:00 AM
Tammy, let me brush the tears away, this is so sadly beautiful, really an emotional write, 7, and do you know my mother's last words before the end were very similar and I also want to thank you so much for my wonderful win in your The Pigeon ..... contest, I am very honoured
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Date: 5/11/2015 6:05:00 AM
Fantastic poem for Sad expression............oh,,sorry for your lose,may God lead him to the promise land.
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Date: 5/11/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thank you for the nice comment Afolabi.
Date: 5/10/2015 10:55:00 PM
Such a heartfelt poem Tammy... a nice tribute... may her soul rest in peace... hugs, nad
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Date: 5/11/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thank you for the nice comment Poesy.
Date: 5/7/2015 8:06:00 PM
Such a poignant tale of faith and love, Tammy. To believe that heaven waits is the Christians' safe harbor. A 7. Hugs!
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Date: 5/11/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thank you for the very nice comment Kim.
Date: 5/3/2015 4:09:00 AM
Aww...that's a sweet and sad poem that tugged at my heartstrings... my condolensces for your loss :)
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Date: 5/4/2015 7:29:00 PM
Thank you Angie for the nice comment.
Date: 5/1/2015 10:48:00 PM
oh my, this is so tender and heartfelt. What a lovely poem, Tammy. SEVEN
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Date: 5/4/2015 7:30:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for the nice comment.
Date: 5/1/2015 7:02:00 PM
One of the most precious moments in life... You've captured it forever in this poem. Beautifully written, Tammy!
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Date: 5/4/2015 7:30:00 PM
Thank you Kelly for the very sweet comment.
Date: 4/29/2015 8:54:00 AM
Oh, so painful. And your melancholy composition is one of the best 21st century send-offing verses.. May God give you the strength as you mourn your aunt's demise. Do not resist the tears, simply cry and cry till you have that lightness of spirit, and I'm crying with you...7+++!!!
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Date: 5/4/2015 7:31:00 PM
Thank you for the fantastic comment Hannington.
Date: 4/29/2015 2:19:00 AM
Have to admit my eyes welled up reading this Tammy...Great write and please accept my condolences...
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Date: 5/4/2015 7:31:00 PM
Thank you so much Tim.
Date: 4/28/2015 9:41:00 AM
Touching ....
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Date: 5/4/2015 7:32:00 PM
Thank you Mario.

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