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August Attack

Blow for now your heat on rippling leaves; unjaded, they don't drop... the pressure snarls in veins on leafy cheek's different masks (too many airs) color shy— fallen raked

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/8/2023 5:27:00 AM

unjaded, they don't drop... the pressure snarls

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 8/19/2023 8:35:00 PM

Someone once told me, all of life can be summed up as seasonal. Much can be found in your message.... A.S.

Valsa George

Date: 8/18/2023 4:09:00 AM

Very original ! This poem I consider as a forerunner to Autumn. The time is drawing near for the raking of leaves.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/16/2023 5:53:00 PM

Two poems with masks…masks on your mind…color shy, fallen, raked!

Bill Baker

Date: 8/15/2023 2:11:00 PM

Fall is coming. Thanks for the prequel poem, Paige. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/15/2023 11:12:00 AM

It never fails to astonish me how a succinct collection of words can convey such profound meaning. The adept utilization of language in this context greatly appeals to me.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/15/2023 10:56:00 AM

Paige, this is quite wonderful! So filled with impressive images - "heat on rippling leaves," "the pressure snarls." Such wonderful word usage. Enjoyed this very much through its creative originality of thought and expression! Blessings!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/13/2023 5:40:00 PM

Hi Paige, I really like the feel of this, especially 'unjaded, they don't drop' - says much with few lines~