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AUGUST

AUGUST DAYS ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Air is heavy with the scent of ripened fruit. August days, like golden coins, disappear as quickly as a pirate’s loot. The trees, nature's own cathedral, stand tall and still, their leaves, a rustling hymn, to the whispers of the wind's will. August's heat, a fiery passion, ignites the soul, preparing us for fall, the season of abundance we often extol. August's nights, a velvet cloak, wrap the world in shade, a time for dreams and magic, when the stars are magnificently displayed. The fireflies, like tiny lanterns, light the way, as crickets serenade, clicking their legs together—their mating cliché. August, a month of earthy wonder and enchantment, one that is transformative and transient, filled with seasonal contentment
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Gauthier Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 7:05 PM
Precious ~ a lovely tribute to a particularly beautiful month of transition.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 5:14 PM
many thanks! .... :-)
Fowler Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 7:08 AM
I appreciate your vivid imagery here dear Sara. August in Texas often unbearable (not this year however), but there is always beauty! :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 5:42 PM
thanks for your uplifting comments, Linda. Yes, most years August in Texas is unbearable...this year's weatjer has been a welcome sight. Yes, always beauty
George Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 2:28 AM
You have made August the most coveted month with your great descriptions as a time for dreams and magic. I really loved your usage- 'tree, nature's Cathedral'. Dear Sara, greatly enjoyed these beautifully rhyming couplets on the month of August.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 5:37 PM
thank you, Valsa, for your gracious comments. Your words mean a great deal to me...have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara
Baker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:06 PM
Lovely Rhyme poetry, Sara, Your imagery and wit shine through. Hugs, Bill
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 5:36 PM
thank you, dear hubby. You're alway so supportive of my poetry. Color me grateful, hugs, me
Daniels Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 10:59 PM
Keen insight of August in the North, Sara. Leaves as a rustling hymn is beautiful as is trees as a cathedral. Full of pausing colour & ending ties up poem beautifully. Lovely August day 2 U.x.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 5:35 PM
thank you, Ghairo! I appreciate your lovely comments about my poem. Grateful for your visit, hugs, Sara
Parker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 7:52 PM
Since moving to Florida 40 years ago, I have missed Autumn; your poem gave it back to me...Frederic
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 5:35 PM
awwww, thank you...what a thoughtful thing to say.... :-)
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 1:25 PM
Beautiful delight write! Have a nice season :-)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 5:25 PM
thanks, AA...appreciate your visit and comments today, Sara
Fleming Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 1:16 PM
A fitting tribute - enjoyed! :) john
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 5:24 PM
thank you, kind sir...have a great evening! :-) Sara
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 12:34 PM
Hello Sara, well for me at least this year. August is a bit of month. We do not have enough rain. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 11:12 AM
Hello Sara, There is no rain this year in August. or sometimes very little rain. Your August month is better than mine. Hugs. /Darlene/
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 5:24 PM
August can be a challenge here as well....this year has been different and milder...easier to keep our yard looking fresh and keeping flowers, etc., from withering. wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
Poet Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:51 AM
This verse glimmers with light and vivid scenes! The charming words and gentle rhyme capture the essence of this splendid month. Inhaling the sour aroma brought back a memory of childhood spent standing beneath a weathered plum tree. A Fave for me
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 5:23 PM
awww, thank you, dear Sotto, for your enthusiasm for this poem. I discovered it buried in a file. I'm glad I brought it to the light of day. I grew up with plum trees scattered all over our backyard. Nothing like the taste of a warm, freshly picked Autumn plum! I'm grateful for your Fave...that means a great deal to me, have a splendid evening, Texas hugs, Sara
Hughes Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 9:41 AM
Sara, this poem sparkles with brilliance and imagery!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 5:20 PM
thank you for visiting and for your positive comments, Mark. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
DiMino Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 8:53 AM
"their leaves, a rustling hymn, to the whispers of the wind's will." -- Love that! "fireflies, like tiny lanterns, light the way, as crickets serenade, clicking their legs together" -- Splendid imagery! A lovely poem, enjoyed very much.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 5:20 PM
wow, thanks, Joe for such enthusiastic and encouraging comments. I don't typically write in rhyme; but this poem I wrote a couple of years ago and found it yesterday, buried in a file...So I'm grateful that it has now seen the light of day and that you enjoyed it so. Color me grateful, Sara
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August 20, 2025 at 7:58 AM
I love your poem. The enchanting description and rhyme truly defines this wonderful month. It reminded me of my youth, when I stood by an old gnarly apple tree and inhaled the tart smell of rotting apples. It was the circle of life that is so evident in August which your poem reminds me.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 5:18 PM
thanks for visiting and for sharing a bit of your childhood August remembrances. Mine is of picking tart plums from the plum trees, pregnant with ripe plums. I appreciate your positive comments! wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
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