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Atonement

The image of guilt has been etched in our conscience from the moment we are born sketched in charcoal, shades of black and partly gray, sharp against white, bitter truths against the light A contrast of shadows, shapes, Right against wrong Seeking the confessional for layers of a coat of shame A shedding of the shroud of self loathing A lifting of the weight of anxiety that pulls with the force of gravity against the axis of one's self esteem It does not necessarily always come wrapped in a box where solitary confinement is surrounded by hushed voices wrapped in anonymity bathed in the holy waters of forgiveness sprinkled with a blessing and a promised Hail Mary It can come from a child left with the evidence of a crumb still clinging to a chin Or can come as the last breath from the one facing death It is accompanied by the soft sound of relief, a sigh, a whispered voice groping at the frayed edge in hope of salvation of hope for forgiveness We are born knowing the score When keeping the weight of the shame holds more than we can bear ______________________________________ Contest: "The Confessional"

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Date: 10/7/2013 9:52:00 PM
Outstanding
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Date: 7/17/2013 8:55:00 PM
Really beautiful! Carrie! Thank you for your kind words...jimbo
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Date: 7/12/2013 12:40:00 PM
the wide range of emotion is transcended into a wonderful revelation of poetic instances so potent that what is left is only awe from where i am... you are #1, carrie..:) hugggs!
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Date: 7/11/2013 7:11:00 PM
This is such a fantastic contest entry my friend! You have exceeded even your highest level of expertise with this poem, a fabulous piece! What a tremendous verse, such an amazing poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 7/11/2013 6:54:00 PM
Wow! Carrie, this is so well written! Fantastic write! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/11/2013 6:43:00 PM
These lines are spectacular. All of them! Very, very thought-provoking.
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Date: 7/11/2013 6:39:00 PM
This is a wise poem you have writte. Thanks for your words of support, they are appreciated.
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Date: 7/11/2013 4:40:00 PM
Carrie, your free verse is just so wonderfully written, you are a true poet, best of luck in the contest, constance
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Date: 7/11/2013 4:07:00 PM
Beautifully written. :o)
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