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At the Millpond

The millwheel will not turn again till spring for Winter’s icy cold grip holds it firm. She squeezes it like Her private plaything, though Her crushing power is but short-term. As shorter days subtly lengthened; the sun slowly began to liquefy the ice. And the waterwheel shook, and almost spun, while the miller posted his asking price. Whispers ran through the town from door to door, the ice is breaking up at the millpond. And housewives could soon buy flour once more, for each village, and its mill shared a bond. The millwheel shimmies free from Winter’s grip, shuddering as the water level peaks. And as pressure increases drip by drip, the pond ice melts, and the wooden wheel creaks. (Quatrain) 6/26/2018
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Haight Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 8:34 AM
I like the way you addressed the theme, Emile. A well-written poem and the picture supports it very well. Sandra
George   Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Love the picture and the poem Emile. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Pinet Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Elaine, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile
Gentry Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 7:08 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed!
Pinet Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Wigley Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 1:22 AM
Thanks for entering my humble contest, Emile, enjoyed reading your piece. Congrats on your win! Regards, Viv
Pinet Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 7:27 AM
Thanks Viv, I appreciate both the comments and the placement my friend, Emile.
Man Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Emile.. you have a gifted pen and I respect your work much!
Pinet Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 6:53 AM
Thanks Lyric Man, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile
Wanter Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 6:54 PM
What nice reading on this 98 degree day! A very nice poem, too.
Pinet Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Thanks Sunlite, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile
Gauthier Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 2:00 PM
Well penned, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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