At the Millpond

The millwheel will not turn again till spring for Winter’s icy cold grip holds it firm. She squeezes it like Her private plaything, though Her crushing power is but short-term. As shorter days subtly lengthened; the sun slowly began to liquefy the ice. And the waterwheel shook, and almost spun, while the miller posted his asking price. Whispers ran through the town from door to door, the ice is breaking up at the millpond. And housewives could soon buy flour once more, for each village, and its mill shared a bond. The millwheel shimmies free from Winter’s grip, shuddering as the water level peaks. And as pressure increases drip by drip, the pond ice melts, and the wooden wheel creaks. (Quatrain) 6/26/2018
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Date: 7/30/2018 8:34:00 AM
I like the way you addressed the theme, Emile. A well-written poem and the picture supports it very well. Sandra
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Date: 7/28/2018 7:48:00 AM
Love the picture and the poem Emile. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 7/28/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Elaine, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile
Date: 7/25/2018 7:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/26/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/24/2018 1:22:00 AM
Thanks for entering my humble contest, Emile, enjoyed reading your piece. Congrats on your win! Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/24/2018 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Viv, I appreciate both the comments and the placement my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/26/2018 9:29:00 PM
Emile.. you have a gifted pen and I respect your work much!
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Date: 6/27/2018 6:53:00 AM
Thanks Lyric Man, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile
Date: 6/26/2018 6:54:00 PM
What nice reading on this 98 degree day! A very nice poem, too.
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Date: 6/26/2018 7:27:00 PM
Thanks Sunlite, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile
Date: 6/26/2018 2:00:00 PM
Well penned, Emile.
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Date: 6/26/2018 3:14:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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