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it began with one snowflake then there were hundreds and thousands swirling, the rusty gate opens and I glide past gnarled trees and past weeping angel statues, oh, I have no fear, for this is my home for many years I have wandered the rows and rows waiting now, I see her amid the jagged shadows of an old tree with white draped lifeless branches, she is kneeling in the snow with her hands pressed together, her face is pale, eyes closed, long dark hair tangled with snowflakes oh, sister love at last you have come . . . . _________________________________ March 13, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/'at last you have come' Copyright Protected, ID 19-1123-428-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Standard Contest 575, sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 3/17/2019 4:46:00 PM
Tremendous verse, I myself can feel, sense almost taste every single word, line.... I am there in I see her grand verse from a grander Poetess... Blessings and peace a Fav for me. James :)
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Date: 3/15/2019 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations for your top win ! :)
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Date: 3/14/2019 12:07:00 AM
Very beautiful, reads like melted chocolate across a frozen cheesecake.
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Date: 3/13/2019 4:30:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work you have penned in this one. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 3/13/2019 2:05:00 PM
Wow Dear Heart, you certainly have a way with words to produce such a thought provoking poem. Very well done my friend, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/13/2019 11:43:00 AM
Well done ! I can see it :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/13/2019 12:33:00 PM
Heidi, thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment !

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