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At Last

There he was so tall and strong, Those twinkling blue/grey eyes. His smile made all around her fade. She couldn't stop the sighs, That welled up now within her, As he walked into the room. She felt if he but looked her way, She'd fall into a swoon. She'd seen him oft around the school, Admired him from afar. He saw her too, a smile, a nod, Then gone, that was 'bout par. She watched him now as he came in, Was greeted by his friends; So confident and self assured, How easily he blends, In any place, with any crowd, She wished she was like him. Then maybe he would notice her. She thought those chances slim; But as she stood there watching him, She found him looking back. He smiled and came toward her, And chills ran down her back. He introduced himself to her, And asked her for her name. He asked if she would like to dance. Her voice she feared was strained. He gently took her hand in his, And led her to the floor, And after for refreshment, To the punch bowl where he poured, A drink for each of them, And with his friendly smile, He told her how he'd watched her, For such a long, long while. The band struck up another tune, As slow the minutes passed. She couldn't hide a little smile, The tune was called, AT LAST.

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Date: 3/23/2021 12:31:00 PM
A nice happy ending Judy, well written verse. Tom
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/23/2021 1:38:00 PM
Thanks so much Tom. God Bless JB
Date: 3/23/2021 11:10:00 AM
Love to read about folk having a Ball! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 3/23/2021 10:12:00 AM
Hi Judy, I enjoyed your write from start to finish. I love reading, girl meets boy to type of writes. I'm a sucker for love and romance. It was good to see the “ feeling “ was mutual and not all in her head. Good ending to a well-written write:-) Alexis
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/23/2021 1:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Alexis. God Bless, JB
Date: 3/23/2021 9:32:00 AM
A special write, Judy! I enjoyed it all the way to the inevitable end. Your title gives it away. Your poem flows nicely and the rhymes are just perfect. Thanks for sharing this story.
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/23/2021 10:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Milton. It was a fun write. Sort of took me back to the fifties. God Bless, JB

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