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At Haiku Mountain - Hs

down the mountain's side its evergreens are leaning- mirrored in a lake yellow daffodils at the foot of the mountain wear guise of sunshine crystal blue water laps at the surrounding shore as blooms spread splendor where the large mountain is embraced by sky’s expanse white clouds are drifting Mother Nature is singing; all around birds are winging May 10, 2023 For the 'Haiku Sonnet' Poetry Contest of Joanna Daniel

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Terry Miller

Date: 6/14/2023 1:50:00 AM

fabulous imagery congratulations

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2023 3:05:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Haiku/Sonnet contest, Andrea - hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/13/2023 1:12:00 AM

Wonderful imagery throughout, Andrea, great work, congratulations:)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/12/2023 1:01:00 PM

Andrea, love your poem, gorgeous imagery, congratulations on your first place win!

Jay Narain

Date: 6/12/2023 9:04:00 AM

Nice nature poem, Andrea. Congrats for your win.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/14/2023 12:40:00 AM

Lovely. This is so peaceful and sweet Andrea <3

Mike Bayles

Date: 5/13/2023 9:04:00 AM

a fav

Mike Bayles

Date: 5/13/2023 9:03:00 AM

Andrea, this is breath-taking, especially the first two haiku.

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/12/2023 5:05:00 PM

beautiful and melodious poem, i .love to contemplate. the more i do, the more i am happy, thanks for sharing yann

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/11/2023 4:40:00 AM

Hello Andrea. Good Morning. Format aside but I know we must recognize the format, the entry is beautiful with imagery softness and more. You expressed the beauty of nature and life wonderfully. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Enjoy the day. Blessings always (smile)