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Today is Good Friday. Jesus, the Nazarene, who robbed no one, cheated no one, who loved all, healed the sick and performed only acts of kindness, when accused guilty and became the victim of gross savagery, didn’t utter a word in self defense, but surrendered to His Father’s will and shed even the last drop of blood. The entire world is literally passing through the dark days of anxiety, pain and uncertainty. This is the time to look up to the cross and plead for His mercy. We know that after the Crucifixion and death, there is a victorious resurrection. Let this hope govern us in these days of wickedness when thousands suffer from cruelty, depression and disease.
At Gethsemane- An unusual heaviness hung in the air. The wind didn’t stir, no single leaf fluttered. The dead weight of engulfing darkness pressed on. It was a fateful night, horrible and stark ! As a monument of misery, walked Jesus weary and distraught as never before, with staggering steps to the Mount of Olives, to the Garden of Gethsemane For him it was the darkest hour of the soul. He needed to be comforted by his Father. Oppressed by anguish, pinned down by the weight of the world’s sin, He groaned and moaned..... He wanted his disciples to keep vigil and pray. To his great annoyance he saw them sleeping. Failed repeatedly by disciples, callously deserted by followers He knew he had to drink the cup of pain all alone. He saw the demoniac hordes of hell surround him He bowed down to touch the ground in prayer His soggy eyes were lifted to Heaven again and again At that fierce hour, sweat pouted out as drops of blood! On the edge of a battle he knew he can’t escape, He prayed in all earnest, his soul writhing in agony ‘If it be possible, let this cup pass from me But not as I will, but thou wilt’ The fatal hour came for him to bear the cross. On his way to Calvary, many followed him, not to share his pain or lessen his burden but to enjoy this spectacle of disgrace and contempt While the whole of his body sagged on three nails, and his flesh, cut and peeled at every point He didn’t scream in agony, but remained calm and a prayer escaped his parted lips “Father forgive them, for they don’t know What they are doing” Is there any other on Earth who suffered the worst type of betrayal and the excruciating pain of crucifixion with such forgiveness and in such grace!

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Date: 4/17/2022 8:52:00 AM
I like the retelling of the story of Jesus' and God's gift to us (all humanity) and to this cursed earth. You've done a very nice job writing it. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 4/16/2022 9:04:00 PM
Valsa, bless you for pouring your soul into these words of Christ's utmost sufferings. It is never easy for one who loves the Savior to think deeply of all the misery he had to endure. But when we do, it is made clearer how much he loves us and can empathize with our own suffering. God bless you this Easter, my friend ~ John
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Date: 4/15/2022 8:42:00 AM
Great rendition of the last days of Jesus. But He rose again. He has conquered the world.
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Date: 4/15/2022 7:24:00 AM
No, dear sister, no man or god! Brava! shalom, shalom and Yes, victory over sin and death itself looms ahead. Thank you for this PASSION depicted biblically.
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Date: 4/15/2022 4:37:00 AM
Elegant write, Valsa--your words of faith resonate in this heartfelt story of love and sacrifice for humanity. A story of hope and a blissful prayer.
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Date: 4/15/2022 3:48:00 AM
You told the story well in your narrative Valsa, in two days time we rejoice for he rose from the dead. Happy Easter to you and your family. Tom
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