At Death’s Door

There’s a rattle in my chest
And a battle beneath my breast
No longer do I desire to eat
My body is wretched failing weak
But the spiritual me is redeemed

Have you even been in so much pain
You couldn’t whisper swallow or sleep
Pain that drains your eyes from even a weep
Pain that kills will and darkens eyes
And chills all who see you 
I hate that look so pitiful so useless 
Taking more than giving sympathy
Knowing they mean well even in despair 

At deaths door I imagine the other side
The hereafter a simply an absence of pain 
And the most refreshing blueberry rain
A long row of ancestors on either side
Ushering you in with waves and sighs
Congratulating me for time and effort 

Music flowing with no known genre
Beautiful and soothing yet full of energy 
Light so bright at the furthest end
Alluring encouraging like a lake to jump in
Beyond deaths door a peach peace
Waiting to join my spirit set me free from 
Memories bad and good for now
The journey begins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ashley Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 5:34 PM
Dear Karen, I love how the use of rhymes sprinkled within the verse enhances the lyrical flow and content of your impressive poem. I adore "blueberry rain" - refreshing indeed! And "peach peace" - vibrant yet tender. Your imagery is vivid and intriguing depicting a sick body but a healed spirit. A deep, rich poem where helplessness turns to hopefulness. So beautiful and thought-provoking. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Jones Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 9:22 PM
Thank you so much Susan I appreciate that!
One Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 12:50 PM
I can relate to your words, because I have been here more than once.. I hope this is not about you... Your poem flows so well..
Jones Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 1:40 PM
I have been very ill unable to even drink water and lost so much weight I looked the part! But God delivered me and I am fine now. S.O thanks!
Kaufman Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 5:53 AM
Hi Karen, All of your poems are so vibrant with color, love it and hope this one is just in the realms of your imagination. Blessings to you.
Jones Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 11:03 AM
So glad you enjoyed it and yes I use my imagination.
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