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At Dawn

Light breaks the gloom a smile peers the dawn a reflection of fear built throughout the years holding off the questions burnt beneath the soil The Daisy blooms with her brightened whites but what's not seen an utter fight twisted truths and sleepless nights turmoil chokes a fading light In the face of dawn she takes her cue not hinting of a single clue breathing deep and pushing through for what is one supposed to do

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/29/2017 11:02:00 AM
Such a beautiful expression. I read it a few times. I love it!
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Date: 12/27/2017 12:44:00 PM
Yeah I know those feelings... Nice one Tim :) hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 12/27/2017 12:01:00 PM
Tim, a lovely dreamy write, well done !
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Date: 12/27/2017 11:42:00 AM
I know just what you're writing about! Beautifully said!
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Date: 12/27/2017 11:08:00 AM
Nice one Tim. I like the part where the Daisy blooms with her brightened whites ! I can see it :)
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