At Dawn

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Written, July 20, 2023

Poetry/Imagism/At Dawn
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1563-159-20
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

 
I love the beauty of dawn
when the sky starts to lighten
and birds start to peep and tweet
I love lying in bed listening to their songs
growing louder, mingling to a great symphony
and as the sun is peaking
the gulls are flying over and over in circled flight
and mated crows glide high 
and dive down again and again calling each other
then, gangs of little brown sparrows 
dart from branches of trees as one
as I watch from my bedroom window with kitty
saying good morning world !

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Valsa George

Date: 7/21/2023 8:33:00 PM

Dawn is beautiful ! The sight of the birds leaving their nests and shooting in to the sky is a visual delight. Their songs is a beautiful prelude to our day ! Lovely poem.

Constance La France
Date: 7/22/2023 10:07:00 AM

Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment, and comment, I love birds and their morning songs !

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/20/2023 3:11:00 PM

Hello Constance, it is a nice way to wake up. I listen to the birds sing every morning. Love & Friendship. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/21/2023 9:38:00 AM

Hello Constance, It is the same for me. My cat wakes me up early in the morning. I enjoy to listen to the birds sing. Love & Friendship /Darlene\

Constance La France
Date: 7/21/2023 7:38:00 AM

Darlene, thank you so much for the comment, it is the best time of the day for me, a time a tranquility before the day begins, blessings !