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At Dawn

Walking back home at a brisk pace Following the narrow path Along the top of a snow covered ridge With mist dissolving, the sky quite cloudless Morning now, well on it's way, A few cars now seen on the road below Through the gate, up the stone walkway Into the warm open kitchen, flooded with light Mouth watering smells of bacon and coffee Newspaper waiting, red cheeked, and satisfied This perfect way to start the day, Wondering why When day had first dawned As she lie in the warmth of her bed There was any hesitation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/11/2009 6:24:00 AM
I really do smell that bacon! Must have been such an awesome walk. Good for you Carrie! Wonderful write. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/11/2009 5:40:00 AM
This is transporting Carrie. Lovely images that fill the mind. Beautifull write! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/11/2009 2:46:00 AM
Excellent. I know just what you mean. :) although, I do not get much peace these days with the kids so little, instead of long quiet walks to contemplate life, I can be found grabbing the plunger (yes, I said plunger) from out of the babies mouth (yes, I said mouth - aaaaa!) or breaking up siblings who are all hands and feet fighting eachother. lol yup...one day, I'll miss this. :) Love, me
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Date: 2/11/2009 12:00:00 AM
Well captured Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 2/10/2009 9:04:00 PM
Mmmmmm! I could almost smell the coffee and bacon! I'm stopping by your house for breakfast tomorrow! hehe ;) You wrote this beautifully and painted such a vivid picture with your words, I could imagine being out walking in the cool early morning light, that fresh-new-day feeling washing over as you step into the kitchen with the sights and smells of morning time...just magical! Thank you so much for your sweet comments and yes it is wonderful to be back souping. :) Love, Amy
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Date: 2/10/2009 8:33:00 PM
Walking in the snow right outta a nice snuggly warm bed that baby is hesitation 101. Great Carrie you almost made me think about walking but I fought it back. Laurie
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Date: 2/10/2009 8:31:00 PM
Such a picturesque poem, beautifully written. Always a pleasure to read your stories, thanks for all your kind words and support, they are always appreciated. Blessings to you my friend, Ron
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Date: 2/10/2009 6:02:00 PM
Beautiful writing Carrie. You took me from in front of my computer and placed me in the poem with your great words..mist dissolving..morning well on its way..cool lines..cool write from a most cool woman. Thanks for your constant support Carrie..love, Chris.
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