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At At

there is a place at at at it is by by by which is near near near not too far from from from you can get there via via via and to be honest it is nice to stay at at at it’s up to you really but if you do stay at at at you might visit visit visit from there go to to to then, if time, see see see not so scenic as as as reminded me of of of but again it’s up to you really the hotels at at at are similar to those in in in quaint and cosy like like like better than than than so there, it’s nice at at at with lots to do and see but, as I’ve said before it’s up to you really

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 7/9/2024 2:58:00 PM

This flows beautifully and gives Dr Seuss vibes whilst still being original. The echoes are like the mind trying to hold the thought then getting sucked into the next line. I enjoyed it :)

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 7/9/2024 3:07:00 PM

Sometimes trying something different can only work in your head, always risky but I enjoyed writing it too, your comment tells me it worked! so thanks D

Ink Empress

Date: 7/9/2024 2:34:00 PM

I hear the words echoing as i read this! Quite clever wordplay there: i love the flow and rhythm! Unique write: pleasure reading this. Sending you light

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 7/9/2024 2:43:00 PM

Another oddball poem, just had a silly idea and ran with it, took more working out than I thought it would! Thanks for reading IE