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At Age Thirteen

Used to look up at the clouds and dream Shapes reminded me of mounds of whipped cream Delightful summer days Dreaming life away As the pretty fillies caused my ears to emit steam

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Date: 7/11/2023 5:20:00 PM
LOL, a nice Limerick, Jack. The turning point in the last line was excellent. Have a great week, my friend. Bill
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/12/2023 3:32:00 AM
Thanks my Texas friend! Fun limerick eh...cheers, Happy Jack!!!
Date: 7/11/2023 12:37:00 PM
..."cloudy shapes as pretty fillies caused steam"......yessir.....glad that's over..... ...stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/12/2023 3:40:00 AM
I was rather enjoying it! LOL Have a happy mid week Stan!

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