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Awarded:  FIRST PLACE

Contest: Ascension

Sponsored by:  Raul Moreno

Shafts of brilliant light Cut through limbs and boughs of blue Seeking solitude. ~~~~~~~~~~ Written: November 19, 2009 1st place in Raul's Moreno's Haiku contest INSPIRED By: The picture he posted for the contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/14/2011 6:41:00 PM
wow, this is pretty, Elaine!
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Date: 4/11/2010 4:55:00 PM
great
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Date: 12/15/2009 12:08:00 PM
Warmest congrats to YOU Elaine on this beautiful and well deserved win! Thanks so much for your thoughtful congrats on my win and for your warm and lovely card! Happiest of holidays to you and yours. love & hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 12/3/2009 4:27:00 PM
thanks for the congrats! Elaine! many smiles! jimbo (I'm in a good mood today! check out my limerick if ya got time!)
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Date: 12/2/2009 1:58:00 PM
Elaine, many many congratulations in your first place in Raul's fine contest >> James,x
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Date: 12/2/2009 1:00:00 PM
Nicely done I wish you luck in the contest
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Date: 12/1/2009 6:49:00 PM
This was beautiful. Congratulations on your first place. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/30/2009 10:29:00 PM
Beautifully done Elaine...and (belated) congratulations on your win! And thanks also for your many kind comments which are so encouraging...Tim
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Date: 11/29/2009 6:18:00 AM
Love this poem, it shows nature at its best...well done...Anna-Marie. Your book is outstanding! Hugs x
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Date: 11/27/2009 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations , on your 1st place win in Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. (…Sorry to be so late. Don’t they say better late than never? I’m finally reading these winners. xoxoxox) . Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 11/27/2009 8:49:00 AM
wonderful winning haiku! Elaine! congrats! and thanks for your welcome comments! jimbo
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Date: 11/26/2009 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, Elaine ... beautiful haiku!
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Date: 11/25/2009 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations, Elaine! Great Haiku! Peace and love, Audrey! Happy Thnxgiving!
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Date: 11/25/2009 12:16:00 PM
nicely penned, congrats on the win!!
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Date: 11/25/2009 7:20:00 AM
Love your poem...Great Job on your win..keep up the good work..I look forward to reading mroe from you :)
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Date: 11/25/2009 7:09:00 AM
Congrats , Elaine on your excellent win ..
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Date: 11/24/2009 2:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place finish! I was really racking my brain trying to figure out what word I wanted to use to describe the light coming through and I liked the words you chose. I really like your first and last lines!
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Date: 11/24/2009 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place finish in Raul's contest my friend. I really liked your haiku the first time I read it. You are on a winning roll--a tribute to your talent. Enjoy your big honor. Happy Thanksgiving! Karen
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Date: 11/24/2009 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations in your fantastic win in Raul's contest Elaine >> James,x
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Date: 11/24/2009 7:45:00 AM
What a gorgeous entry, Elaine! Congratulations on your 1st place win...so well deserved!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/24/2009 7:04:00 AM
Your words, so beautiful, enchanting, stunning and impressive. Deserving of a first place.
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Date: 11/24/2009 5:26:00 AM
Great win! Light & Love
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Date: 11/24/2009 3:35:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Elaine.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/24/2009 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win in Raul's Ascension Contest dear Lainie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/24/2009 1:37:00 AM
congratulations on your win, i really like the middle line 'Cut through limbs and boughs of blue', fabulous. love and light, Lance
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