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to kiss your lips and drift away and feel the allure of palms burning we'll miss the calm passing of the day love is cherished more than time's yearning we adore trembles soft, ever holy to help dreams float aloft with gentleness in silent grace, eyes open slowly the face of love shall rise with tenderness 10/12/17 contest Rhyme Battle IX

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Date: 10/12/2017 7:23:00 PM
Stirring and passionate Frederic. Your poem is smooth and sensual and completely enjoyed this evening. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/12/2017 2:28:00 PM
4th line is deeply dimensional, Frederick. It's fantastic.
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Date: 10/12/2017 1:03:00 PM
:) Good luck, dear Frederic. I love that last line. Superb. Hugs
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Date: 10/12/2017 12:48:00 PM
Very romantic, graceful and soft poem, the image you chose matches the poem so very well, great write!
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Date: 10/12/2017 12:14:00 PM
Gorgeous :) good luck in the contest! xomo
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