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as the waves come in 

a tryst is whispered in the wind . . . scarlet paints the sky
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Terry Miller
Date: 2/24/2025 12:31:00 AM
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Congratulations on your top win for this wonderful poem. I cannot seem to get these bitesize contests, but I shall keep trying.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/24/2025 1:14:00 PM
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It's hard to win a placement. I am lucky to win one out of 6 or 7 times
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/23/2025 11:50:00 AM
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Oh very mysterious and seductive lines! Congratulations! Xo
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/23/2025 7:25:00 AM
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oh! congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/23/2025 5:39:00 AM
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Oh, so much conveyed in so few words! A big CONGRATS on your win, Andrea. Janice
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Margaret Foster
Date: 2/23/2025 5:01:00 AM
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Delightful words and imagery. Andrea. A few words painting a glorious picture. Cheers
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/23/2025 3:49:00 AM
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Wonderful monoku and congratulations on your placement
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/23/2025 3:49:00 AM
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Pretty imagery! Congratulations on your win Andrea!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/1/2019 4:59:00 PM
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This is a beauty...congrats. BG
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/31/2019 6:55:00 AM
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A lovely Haiku Andrea. congrats :)
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 1/30/2019 8:22:00 PM
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I knew this one would be a winner and the top one at that! Congrats for another lst place win! Many thx for your gracious comments re my win and keep on writin' for our delight - Bob
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 1/30/2019 7:00:00 PM
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It paints such a lovely picture, has a softness about it. Congrats on your top win!
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/29/2019 12:11:00 PM
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A beautiful an worthy first placed winning poem, Andrea....Congratulations! Regards // paul
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2019 9:41:00 AM
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Dropping back with my congratulations on your win andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2019 7:57:00 AM
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- I'm back with congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Martin Brown
Date: 1/29/2019 3:04:00 AM
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Very colourful and well explained in a few words.
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Joseph May
Date: 1/28/2019 10:44:00 PM
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I love the 2nd line..Congrats on your win Andrea..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2019 9:54:00 PM
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Lovely! Congrats, Andrea!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/28/2019 8:00:00 PM
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Wonderful haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your win! :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/28/2019 7:55:00 PM
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Lovely, Andrea. Congrats on your top win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/28/2019 7:16:00 PM
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Congratulations on your 1st place win Andrea, beautiful imagery!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/28/2019 7:42:00 AM
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Andrea, a very pretty Ocean haiku
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 1/28/2019 6:31:00 AM
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Beautiful imagery. Good luck in the contest, Andrea.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/28/2019 4:57:00 AM
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The haiku that breezes in and makes the sky seem real. Wow!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2019 4:13:00 AM
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- Sounds romantic, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2019 11:54:00 PM
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beautiful and romantic Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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