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as the waves come in

scarlet paints the sky a tryst whispers on the wind as the waves come in Jan. 27, 2019 for Tania Kitchin's Ocean Waves Haiku Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/1/2019 4:59:00 PM
This is a beauty...congrats. BG
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Date: 1/31/2019 6:55:00 AM
A lovely Haiku Andrea. congrats :)
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Date: 1/30/2019 8:22:00 PM
I knew this one would be a winner and the top one at that! Congrats for another lst place win! Many thx for your gracious comments re my win and keep on writin' for our delight - Bob
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Date: 1/30/2019 7:00:00 PM
It paints such a lovely picture, has a softness about it. Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 1/29/2019 12:11:00 PM
A beautiful an worthy first placed winning poem, Andrea....Congratulations! Regards // paul
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Date: 1/29/2019 9:41:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your win andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2019 7:57:00 AM
- I'm back with congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2019 3:04:00 AM
Very colourful and well explained in a few words.
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Date: 1/28/2019 10:44:00 PM
I love the 2nd line..Congrats on your win Andrea..
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Date: 1/28/2019 9:54:00 PM
Lovely! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 1/28/2019 8:00:00 PM
Wonderful haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:55:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Andrea, beautiful imagery!
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:42:00 AM
Andrea, a very pretty Ocean haiku
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Date: 1/28/2019 6:31:00 AM
Beautiful imagery. Good luck in the contest, Andrea.
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Date: 1/28/2019 4:57:00 AM
The haiku that breezes in and makes the sky seem real. Wow!
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Date: 1/28/2019 4:13:00 AM
- Sounds romantic, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/27/2019 11:54:00 PM
beautiful and romantic Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/27/2019 10:26:00 PM
beautiful... very romantic.
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Date: 1/27/2019 9:54:00 PM
"just sitting on the dock of the bay"....
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Date: 1/27/2019 9:01:00 PM
Like a wave upon the ocean you got the notion, I love it, gl in the contest Andrea,
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Date: 1/27/2019 7:57:00 PM
Beautiful haiku Andrea..best wishes
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Date: 1/27/2019 6:15:00 PM
Very nice and just blended together so well, great job Andrea!
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Date: 1/27/2019 5:02:00 PM
Just beautiful, Andrea..the first two lines set the romantic tone..as the waves come in.
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